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    Default Acrospit 2

    Take a look at me, I’m twice the MC you’ll ever be
    After your fall, I spit on the grave after delivering your eulogy
    Kick a verse, Freddy can’t perform what “I do”
    Every rhyme puts whack MCs through combines with two-inch verticals
    On to you, I smack that fake grimace off your face
    Very dangerous to those that attempt to invade my space
    Enter the dragon, I breathe fire at weak rappers
    Reckon that God added a subnote to the 5th Commandment afterwards
    Yank you straight outta your knock-off Tim boots
    Outta sight, outta mind, like Pablo Escobar’s narcotic truths
    Ubiquitous with this, I’m omnipotent with a sixteen
    Renderin’ you unconscious, Vinne Paz-style, transplant ya spleen
    Correct ya hunchback with a Louisville Slugger bat
    Rippin’ you a new asshole, I’m not ashamed to smack cats on a track
    Every time you try and make me fold under your industrial rule
    We pull a Al Capone, and TAKE OVER YOUR CREW

    "Got heat for everybody/watch the microphone burn..."
    =Akrobatik

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    Default Re: Acrospit 2

    Whatup X! I like this verse a lot. I can see that you've really improved since i last read your shit. There are a lot of good lines in here. My faves are these
    Quote Originally Posted by Xtadas
    Kick a verse, Freddy can’t perform what “I do”
    Every rhyme puts whack MCs through combines with two-inch verticals

    Enter the dragon, I breathe fire at weak rappers
    Reckon that God added a subnote to the 5th Commandment afterwards
    Nice stuff man keep it up. Peace.

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    Default Re: Acrospit 2

    You know I like the message in a verse style PEACE

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    Default Re: Acrospit 2

    Interesting rhymes, like the way you worked it out. I could quote some noteable parts but it was nice. Nice verse.Although towards the end it seemed to involve a lot of references.

    Peace

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    Default Re: Acrospit 2

    is this the one u pmed me about if so


    NICE WORDPLAY AND RHYME SCHEME

    WORK ON UR MULTIS CUZ U GOT NOINE AND THATS WHAT I LOVE

    NO REAL PUNCHES


    BUT VER NICE COMMANDING LINES


    BUT NO REAL PUNCHES

    UR GETTIN GOOD THO

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    Default Re: Acrospit 2

    Always likin this kind of rhymin

    keep postin n gracin us wit lyrics

    Bless, 1


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