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    Default Smokebongoncliff vs VernakuLa

    1 round 10 - 16 lines first to 5 votes, 3-0 is knockout



    yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up
    the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up
    im dressed up, with some nasty facny rhyme
    there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind
    You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
    after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
    i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon
    your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin
    tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been
    not the type of mc to get the party crackin
    Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man
    when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin
    he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin
    yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven


    pz first battle
    Last edited by smokebongoncliff; 07-14-2006 at 01:14 AM.

    Now yo yo, whattup yo, time is runnin out. It's for real though, let's connect politic - ditto. We could trade places, get lifted in the staircases. Word up, peace incarcerated scarfaces

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    sry dun, forgot heres my verse

    This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps
    You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that
    I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us
    Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust
    Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin
    Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin
    Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees
    Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez
    It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance
    You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants


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    i thought u didnt battle rookies vern?
    "When I die bury me with the LO on...
    Official to the death for all eternity and so on"
    Lo Down & Dirty
    " WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL"
    "MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface

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    Quote Originally Posted by tha god concept
    i thought u didnt battle rookies vern?
    i made an exception

    vote Concept

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    vote - vern
    better punches
    "When I die bury me with the LO on...
    Official to the death for all eternity and so on"
    Lo Down & Dirty
    " WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL"
    "MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface

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    votes

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    Quote Originally Posted by smokebongoncliff
    You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
    after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
    Close but smokebongoncliff takes it.
    Remember when I long dicked you and broke your ovary?
    You crab bitch, chicken head hoe, eatin heros, i was the first nigga that had you watchin flicks by dinero.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stevebud23
    Close but smokebongoncliff takes it.
    funny how ur both from chicago, and this is the only battle youve voted on

    0-0 lets get some real votes

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    Vote

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    werd i was gonna say 0-0

    wrdply-nak
    flow-clf
    vcb-tie
    crtvty-tie
    pncs-nak

    not great on either parts, but vern takes it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk
    werd i was gonna say 0-0

    wrdply-nak
    flow-clf
    vcb-tie
    crtvty-tie
    pncs-nak

    not great on either parts, but vern takes it
    peace to the gods dusk

    yea i aint feelin my lyrics ether

    1-0 peace nucca

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    vote homos

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    smokingbongoncliff-
    yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up
    the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up
    (ok opener...)

    im dressed up, with some nasty fancy rhyme
    there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind
    (hmmmm,there is only one mankind)

    You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
    after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
    (wak)

    i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon
    your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin
    (better....)

    tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been
    not the type of mc to get the party crackin
    (this isnt a punch..)

    Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man
    when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin
    (second line alright, the verse flow/wordplay is pretty good)

    he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin
    yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven
    (average closer)

    Vern-
    This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps
    You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that
    (good opener, nice wordplay and on the attack)

    I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us
    Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust
    (average)

    Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin
    Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin
    (lol, nice second line)

    Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees
    Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez
    (hmmmm...attacking some beez? the rhyme seems forced)

    It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance
    You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants
    (nice finshing lines)

    Overall Vern gets the vote, hope smokinbongoncliff keeps battling, but this was pretty straight forward, Vern had better punches, wordplay the whole deal....
    peace to both writers
    Vote=Vern












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    yea i agree i should lose this. i really didnt put time into it. my verse was pretty much just jokes. i dno fun tho

    Now yo yo, whattup yo, time is runnin out. It's for real though, let's connect politic - ditto. We could trade places, get lifted in the staircases. Word up, peace incarcerated scarfaces

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    cool, keep posting verses and voting coz no one fucking votes these days












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