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    Default Gorilla Marketin 101

    http://son.sattorirecords.com

    new logo i designed, new collage, implemented the flash
    player again

    regular thing


    i love my new logo thos, its newlyn.com 's ferox font.
    didnt buy it just copied it off the site and edited/traced
    in illustrator, added some flourishes

    blah, free mp3 too

    eatit up


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    i don't like the song on the mainpage.

    the audio sucks ass so I can't say much for the lyrics when they sound like that.

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    thanks

    this is the graphics forum

    i have the same song in the audio section too

    but oh well


    audio plays fine for me, maybe your speakers are real lound

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    yeh the music sucks balls

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    wtf is that shit it looks like a homo thug with spray paint on him


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    do waste your precious time on me

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    Quote Originally Posted by Young Granger
    yeh the music sucks balls

    Quote Originally Posted by akabobbyd
    i don't like the song on the mainpage.

    the audio sucks ass so I can't say much for the lyrics when they sound like that.


    check this...

    if yall aint feelin a design or project someone takes their time to share with us then thats cool... we are entitled to opinion. but if you take the time to say something sucks... atleast offer some constructive critism.. ways to improve, etc...

    "its sucks" and " i dont like it" do not offer any help...

    and thats part of the reason we as designers post our work.. for constructive feedback and to represent.

    keep that in my mind when replying... seriously.. nobody likes a dickhead!!!!


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    thank you sir.

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    I think I like the synth part in the beat, but the mix is way off (vocals sound muddy, snare is too harsh/loud, the flash link/player seems to work better now, but it still sees like you are using flash just for the sake of it, as there is no added style or information by using it the way you have.

    Are all these pages forming part of a bigger satorirecords.com site? because what I've seen already as individual pages, seems pretty confusing, no real direction or clear statements being made?

    IMO the way your approachinig your site design (and this is only based on what you have posted here) is making you look more ametuer than if you had a real basic website with clearer information, and a definite structure so visitors could quickly re-find any information they are interested in.

    Don't get me wrong, It's maybe not helping that I keep seeing these pages out of context, so whats your actual home-page url? that way I can see how it all fits together.

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    HZ brought some good points as far a design wise... i gotta agree. but as for the song.. lyrically speaking, im feelin it. altho the sound of the beat makes it hard to listen to. lyrics are there... might wanna explore some other areas of beats tho! nice work and stay at it.

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