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    Yo
    Day Of Rest Moonlight Sets The Tone Story Told Endless Scripts Unfold
    From The Dome Purest Form Killah Bee Storm Swarm The State Checkmate Cast The Winds Take The Glimpse Wirlwinds
    Portal
    To Different Areas
    Soak In Life Ill Meet U At The Top Of The Clif
    Telescope At The Star
    Revolves Around Me Astronomy New Discovery Winds Chilly
    Portrait Like Davinci Winds Drift Gravity Feel My Body Drop Back To Earth
    Reality Verse Slash Opponents Afterlife Components
    3rd Planet From The Sun Evolutionary Energy Force The Sword Swing Strikes Devils Off Course MY SOURCE OF UNITY DIVIDES SANTUARY GATHERINGS LIGHT BEAMS FLASH THE INTENT TO SACRIFICE
    MIRACLES HAPPEN WITH MENTAL STIMULATION
    HEAL THE WORLD WhERE FACING
    NO ERASING HISTORY IS THE TIMELINE LIFELINES BLOOD PUMPS LIFE TO AN INSTANT REVELATION TO THE LAST CRIES OF BABIES BORN
    FIRST BREATH ALREADY SCORNED
    MILITARY UNIFORM PERFORM FORMS OF HYBRID TRANSFORM
    DIVIDED LIFES TORN
    TRUMPETS BE THE SIGNS
    4.4.4 BE THE RYME
    WE ARE DISCUSSING THE END OF THE WORLD-OR HOW TO DELAY IT.

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    Default Re: Sunday

    i always like that absract direction you take it to, nice drop...peace and 1
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    Default Re: Sunday

    Your verse seemed not well placed (or organized), but i think thats just the fact about it. It continues to flow in some disbanded effort. All the words seem to be expressing something whilst they (th words ) are joined. Nice though. Hey what would happen on sunday?

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