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    Default LOve BOat!!

    I wrote this one a little while ago to that busta rhymes/mariah carey track

    Just expressin' the way I feel thru the motion of this pen/
    let the ink release emotion cause i'm feelin' frozen when in/
    your presence baby girl, u got my heart beatin'/
    palms sweatin', paradise palm springs, start heatin'/
    look into yur eyes, gaze into a rare beauty/
    of purity, pretty smile just lurin' me in/
    gettin' closer/
    thoughts like a roller coaster/
    shot by cupid talkin' stupid like how i ain't suppose tah/
    french candy, yur sweetness got me hungry for affection/
    i promise you'll be safe in my arms, wit more protection/
    than these other cats, they tryin' to play u for some sexin'/
    I know i'm new to this, but i'm willin' to learn some lessons/
    wettin' my lips, just dyin' to give you a kiss/
    feel the passion with deepness like the hidden abbys/
    yo, we can laugh together/
    a perfect match can't ask for better/
    pillow fight in the twilght, my love will last forever...baby/

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    Default Re: LOve BOat!!

    shit was good. no homo. i was gonna skip it but then i remembered what track u were talking about and the beat popped into my head and i thought why not read dukes rhymes while its there, hahah

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    Doesn't seem real. But somehow you had the flow going . Maybe if you had been more creative.

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    what do u mean it doesn't seem real...& creative?

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    Nice!

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    Default Re: LOve BOat!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Tunavillian
    I wrote this one a little while ago to that busta rhymes/mariah carey track

    Just expressin' the way I feel thru the motion of this pen/
    let the ink release emotion cause i'm feelin' frozen when in/
    your presence baby girl, u got my heart beatin'/
    palms sweatin', paradise palm springs, start heatin'/
    look into yur eyes, gaze into a rare beauty/
    of purity, pretty smile just lurin' me in/
    gettin' closer/
    thoughts like a roller coaster/
    shot by cupid talkin' stupid like how i ain't suppose tah/
    french candy, yur sweetness got me hungry for affection/
    i promise you'll be safe in my arms, wit more protection/
    than these other cats, they tryin' to play u for some sexin'/
    I know i'm new to this, but i'm willin' to learn some lessons/
    wettin' my lips, just dyin' to give you a kiss/
    feel the passion with deepness like the hidden abbys/
    yo, we can laugh together/
    a perfect match can't ask for better/
    pillow fight in the twilght, my love will last forever...baby/
    ... Hottness ... fo sho ... flows perfectly with the beat.

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    Illness!
    My mind is ferocious
    I spit for Gangsters and maniacs that defy prognosis
    It's Ill Bill, my reality's my psychosis

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