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    VernakuLa
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    Default Whos game

    1 round, 20 lines

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    I aint your average rhyme spitter, the pussy splitter
    always stacking figures its j.r. the mind ripper
    the marijuana got me choking, my third eye open
    see them dudes through the walls and the nines that they be holding
    and i aint even gonna try on the rest
    cuz no matter what you write its already second best
    so i'm not trying to be relevent, on a site thats so irelevent
    carbomb your moms house just to show you my relevance
    you take it up the ass like the fat dude from deliverence
    I'm eating chicken wraps, trying to figure out my raps
    thats right chicken not pork, i watch my trans-fats
    dont eat chinese food cuz i heard they cook cats
    and dont visit wu tang corp cuz the site is full of rats
    i'd rather go to the store and drop twenty on a hat
    than sit on this site just to see your garbage rap
    shit only sixteen lines, i'm out holla back
    We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation

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    ^damn you got a few solid lines
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
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    Quote Originally Posted by jR_killa View Post
    I aint your average rhyme spitter, the pussy splitter
    always stacking figures its j.r. the mind ripper
    the marijuana got me choking, my third eye open
    see them dudes through the walls and the nines that they be holding
    and i aint even gonna try on the rest
    cuz no matter what you write its already second best
    so i'm not trying to be relevent, on a site thats so irelevent
    carbomb your moms house just to show you my relevance
    you take it up the ass like the fat dude from deliverence
    I'm eating chicken wraps, trying to figure out my raps
    thats right chicken not pork, i watch my trans-fats
    dont eat chinese food cuz i heard they cook cats
    and dont visit wu tang corp cuz the site is full of rats
    i'd rather go to the store and drop twenty on a hat
    than sit on this site just to see your garbage rap
    shit only sixteen lines, i'm out holla back
    kima post sober duke
    Last edited by VernakuLa; 08-10-2006 at 08:31 PM.

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    Murder in the First

    damn Nak, you better than that

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    My vote goes to jr killa
    Better overall verse, flow was good too.

    Nak's closer was terrible but the rest was ok.
    Nak did you leave off a line at the end supposed to rhyme wit challenge?
    You should have came harder than that, is the verse not finished or somethin?
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    VernakuLa
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    oh dsht id idint fuibnish itnim high as fujcik right now fuck 7thqt verse ikk be back

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    VernakuLa
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    1-0 still 8ima jus5t wit \\ till i cqan see shit

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    ur ok, nak idk what to say anymore

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    I nth3in'k sun1 iz fakimg !t

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    ur ok, nak idk what to say anymore
    say im gay dude

    lol eric is cool

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    -stupider-

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    VernakuLa
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    nah I guessin im aight now tried to take a nap but w/e i can see better

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    VernakuLa
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    Keystyle

    This kid has problems..spit facts and I solve em
    His rhymin's outa place like a day pitch black in august!
    Grits facts and then knowledge, My shots'll enlarge your pelvis
    Murder you, and put the "spark thru your brain" like "Charger helmets!"
    Hard to tell kid, your far from sellin...Release the facts on ya?
    He thinks *Suckin E-40*...with ease, "beatin" vernakula!
    Speak and I laugh at ya! Feinds even "crack" on ya (make a joke)
    Hes so bitchmade, this kid bleeds from when I'm tappin ya (weak bar)
    Dude has a slow makin, Gets hyped cuz wack nerds thinks hes nice
    This battles won more me, no debatin, like the existance of jesus christ
    This kids weak as mice, believe I might give a lesson or two
    I'll presently proove, after this verse this kids essence is through!
    Obsessin' my mooves...this kid is still testin the truth
    Even dirts got more skill, and thats lesser than you!

    peace this is mad lazy tho

    * E 40 is the self proclaimed "king of slang" slang is aka vernaculars, so jerking off E 40 he still aint beatin vernakula get it?
    Last edited by VernakuLa; 08-10-2006 at 11:11 PM.

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    yo lemme redo my shit, put this to an end

    okay homie let me put you on the game
    let hecklar and koch rearrange your mindframe
    vernakular, that was unspectacular, your lacking experience
    when i push the 21, i have you praying for deliverence
    but aint no love in the sky
    speak my name on your lips is the quickest way to die
    but trust me i could show you war visuals
    Graduated from the ten only left two jewels
    but what's really the risidual, War stories scars and screams
    you think that your safe behind a computer screen
    Switch my mind to fibre optic travel a light beam
    from this perspective whose really going at light speed
    escape to a light dream, when i re-up fix my eyes bleed
    the chronic persuasion have me feeling what i fiend
    get high snatch your moms and stick her with the icepick
    tie her up in the trunk and drive the bitch off a bridge
    but first i have the bitch yoked up swallowing my kids
    she loved the freaky shit, but it wasnt all butter
    sneaky bitch used her pussy muscles to pull off the rubber
    blew out her back, from the fierce counter attack
    said she love to ride dick and give birth to vernak

    meh.. not that great, but still better than yours.
    We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation

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