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    shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
    if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
    like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
    i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
    okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
    Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
    wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
    have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
    you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
    see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
    and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
    but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
    and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
    pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga
    We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation

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    c im the type of person that wuld try to help someone out before talkin shit, but u realllyyy need to work on ur skills b. all around.
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    Quote Originally Posted by jR_killa View Post
    shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
    if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
    like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
    i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
    okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
    Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
    wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
    have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
    you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
    see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
    and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
    but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
    and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
    pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga
    damn, I ain't heard the word 'nigga' used so many times in a paragraph since the KKK was on Jerry Springer, step your game up kid, that shit's played out, git original with your words, that ain't even a verse right there, that's some kid shit!

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    what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.

    shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
    if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
    like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
    i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
    okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
    Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
    wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
    have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
    you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
    see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
    and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
    but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
    and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
    pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid
    We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation

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    the problem isnt the word u used but to put it after ever fuckin line is just pointless, i understand you tryin to b creative and do somethin different but that doesnt neccesarily mean that its gonna b better.
    try somethin else and ill get back at u.
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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    Quote Originally Posted by jR_killa View Post
    what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.

    shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
    if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
    like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
    i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
    okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
    Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
    wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
    have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
    you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
    see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
    and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
    but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
    and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
    pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid

    The problem is the content, rhyming the same word at the end of EVERY bar isnt impressive, hate to break it to you

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    umm yeah if you look at the word before the last word of every bar... you know what nevermind... did you even read my verse?
    We aint homies, you just know me by affiliation

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