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    Default Something for amateurs and pro's

    This gonna be a battle only difference is the rules;

    1. Gotta go through three diff styles eg; Pimp, christian, thug.......whatever. Just make sure you using 3 kinda styles in your verse.

    2. Closing line gotta tie in with the opening line.

    3. Gotta shout out for O'l Dirty (anywhere in your verse)

    4. Gotta start with the word "air"

    Its a challenge, something new. Lets see who really rules the forum. Somebody come up with a better idea, post it on the forum. Cause its always the same thing over and over. Be original.

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    Lmao your just naming all the random bullshit you got in your own verse

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    Default Re: Something for amateurs and pro's

    Quote Originally Posted by OG Kane
    Lmao your just naming all the random bullshit you got in your own verse
    ^^^co-sign, but you should try, OG Kane...I wanna see you beat dupreez...

    "Got heat for everybody/watch the microphone burn..."
    =Akrobatik

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    ok, i will after i beat 7th again

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    Hey bro it dont have to be those exact rules. Im just trying to make it kinda equal. If anyone wanted to change them, thats cool. Im just trying to make it a battle where you can see who got the real skill. So who wanna start? And trust me I made that as random as possible. I havent used those before.

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    yo dupreez keep this battle open holmes

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    Air? seriously Dupreeze,uve got mental retardation
    from ma gangbanging, yo, i fucked the kkk nation
    check this,ma lines be ma own fuckin creation
    fuckin smash urs usin ma black thug variation
    u wunt last against me, im bigga than a tree
    step up kid, ill set ya faggot soul free
    i knew Ol'Dirty bastard,u a fuckin mockery
    Ol'Dirty Bastard ROCKS! u an insult to his memory
    i stuff ma leadpipe down ya oesophagus,leave ya choking
    take this seriously fuck, i fuckin aint joking
    when i say ya ass ma niggaz be poking
    leave ya pissin on the floor,ma threat's nerve wracking
    after u read this, ya gonna sit and contemplate
    what ya askin for is a twist of fuckin fate
    ya fag lines make me wanna sneeze
    air Dupreeze? ull be feelin my ass breeze

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    Quote Originally Posted by b1ack fact10n
    Air? seriously Dupreeze,uve got mental retardation
    from ma gangbanging, yo, i fucked the kkk nation
    check this,ma lines be ma own fuckin creation
    fuckin smash urs usin ma black thug variation
    u wunt last against me, im bigga than a tree
    step up kid, ill set ya faggot soul free
    i knew Ol'Dirty bastard,u a fuckin mockery
    Ol'Dirty Bastard ROCKS! u an insult to his memory
    i stuff ma leadpipe down ya oesophagus,leave ya choking
    take this seriously fuck, i fuckin aint joking
    when i say ya ass ma niggaz be poking
    leave ya pissin on the floor,ma threat's nerve wracking
    after u read this, ya gonna sit and contemplate
    what ya askin for is a twist of fuckin fate
    ya fag lines make me wanna sneeze
    air Dupreeze? ull be feelin my ass breeze
    Air becoming vary rare, I cant bare this,
    dude i get you aired you never been heard.
    your shit was whack - dude you been smokin crack
    I have you racked in the butchery, who's gotcha ya back.
    sound like you still rocking burberry, ima punch you like
    stallone did in rocky, yo ma wont take ya back. Matter of fact,
    ima beat you easily, I do it backwards, you too "evian"
    Here's a tissue you sounding kinda "sneazy", your dream was to kiss
    snow white,,....dont look so "grumpy", man you's way to "dopey",
    why aint you "happy" look like you need the "doc" couldnt kiss snow
    white cause ya was too "bashful"
    "Gotta get up and beeeee somebodyyyyyy" RIP - O'l dirty.
    You need to stop smoking the herb, looks like its fucking wit yo
    verbs. Ima keep this simple, kinda like yo pimples, and you got dimples,
    yous a wimp, go grab a wimpy burger, Motherfuckers like you wasting
    air, shut the fuck up, I flame grill you rare never well done. PEACE

    I was hoping someone would come up with a better word than "air"
    to start off with. Fuck that was a shit word if ever i came across one.

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    i thought i told you to keep this battle open...
    aight we battle some other time dupreez

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    its still open homeboy, dont be shy. You wanna battle then battle. You know the rules.

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    Is it only me and B1ack Fac10n that have the balls to battle to that? I know its shit topics but fuck I thought that would be easy for some of you. Obviously not.

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    Air clogged wit gunsmoke, airways clogged you done choked
    when the ODB spoke, grounds broke
    I toke you like a blunt rolled with fine ass smoke
    it's simple, you ain't pimp you pimple
    get popped, my shit drops makin' faggots stop
    bitch, look and listen...now i'm switchin' straight to christian
    big ups to my man Jesus, who died just to please us
    wrath of god, staight disease us with plague
    now, back track to my pimp ass mack
    i'm like dolemite, dynomite and outta sight
    betta believe my pimp hand is tight, right straight into the night
    alright, this is a weird ass kind of battle, Dup....but I'll saddle up
    rodeo, round all you fuckin' cattle up, straight to the slaughter
    i don't care, nobody is spared when my gunsmoke fills the air

    yo, honestly...that was pretty interesting but it's hard to really "battle" something like that

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    Dude ass kissing aint my style. But, on the real. You just killed that right there. That was pretty sick. Doubt anyone could beat that.

    Yeah it is hard to battle too. But as you can see, that shows where the skill is, as its almost as close to freestlying you gonna get on a forum. You dont know who is just dropping shit or who is actually thinking and writting shit down so they look "talented".

    In my opinion you just won that. I would like to see if anyone could actually better you on those rules.

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    Phosphate ripped it off again.as usual.

    But that was fuckin sick.

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    Air is a scare when you get tossed up like a pass from steve mcnair, i'm bringing this shit back like it was laced with nair, life ain't fair, light up a square, pour out some liqour for my nigga Dirty, R.I.P, silence for 30, par rhyming niggas when i'm spitting birdies, you aint no hole in one so don't fake the funk, ya fetis rhymes should be left like junk in the trunk, lui kang bycicle kick ya bitches leavin' big lumps..scorpion style, get over here, hell fire uppercut, death by a spear.
    Scared, when i Mcnair you tossing you like ragdolls throught the air...


    kinda short but i gotta bounce.....
    OmO < Idiom

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