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    Default Bigot Hitman's Book

    Wu banga/Dead President/I Run Da Hills/Negroid Czar/Mister Big/Bigot Hitman


    All me
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 06-04-2007 at 10:58 PM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    ghey
    a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video


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    slippy slippy

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    nice. you got a good flow and some killer lines in there. keep at it fullah, its good shit!

    KIA KAHA

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    Default sumthin I wrote 20 minuets ago

    I like to make up rhymes even though I'm wack as hell, but here's somethin i just wrote.

    yo yo
    My rap is a remedy, bust caps in many enemies
    hastely, not time to waste, spray yo face with the mace
    Crazy, drop back rhymes from another time
    Surprising... like a old tree struck by lightning
    Yo I envision a germanation of a thirld world german nation
    Anchient Civilization, Scriptures locked up in basments
    Test me, I'll fabricate an irate tirade
    Display dormant harangues, Leaked from my rap vein
    Causin pain yo, let me actuate the process
    Extinguishing burinin crosses, Kill off the Drug bosses
    Take over, reveal, efface, then terminate they losses
    This disc jockey said my lines ruff and cold, like ice hockey
    Some dig in yo pockets shit, orginal like dennis rodman shit
    Silver picks, metal pick, platics picks, comb candle wicks
    Come off like a remix, even jon cena couldn't see it
    Fuck him, i'm the champ, bust ya head wit a marble lava lamp
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 06-06-2006 at 11:08 AM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    You've got some good shit in there, some nice similes and good abstract imagery etc. If anything I'd just say work on making it flow together a little more smoothly. Keep at it.

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    Default First verse ever

    Very first verse, this is also the wackest verse on this thread. It embarassing on the real so don't even read it.Don't read this shit and think i'm wack, look at the pages after 10.

    Call me solomon, some say soli
    Hit'em hard and quick like ali
    Peep these niggas followin me
    They probaly holdin, underneath the clothin, pockets is swolen
    Yo, ya never know but lets sho ( sure)
    Cause i aint tryin to catch a brick today,
    I think these was the dudes runnin trains on the freeway
    Keep ya pace steady, hold up! i'm not ready
    Shoot these niggas quick, make sure you see they spaggetti
    Another d-day, bullets is bout to spray
    Bodies is bout to lay, they gear old, shit bout to decay
    pedestrians, bystanders, smashed by stray black hammers
    I'ma black panther, slick like pajamas,
    This the gamma ray, I think those niggas turned the other way
    They lucky, we was bout to make'em squeal like puppies, fuck em
    Sometimes hoe's greed starts to slow me
    Carry swords like shinobi, clever and tough like ginobili
    I proceed, prevail, penetrate like nails
    Broke to ya minds gate, discovered you fake cause
    It was built of easy bakes, inside of plastic crates, faggot
    Change ya maxi pad'and, thinkin about fashion
    I should split yo whole cabbage.
    _________________________________________________

    I don't care if its wack i'm just bored.
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 12-09-2006 at 01:49 PM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Default Great verse ( for me )

    I just posted this in the official kill the guy above thread, but i know everyone doesn't go to that thread. I wanna hear comments on it, i know its not great for a rapper, but for me is great, cause i'm not that good.

    I exploit enemy voids ,with potions and poise
    Approach with no fear, turn men back to boys
    Revert their gats to water guns, change them fags to honey buns
    Physical toughness for you brothers, Aggressive manuevers for you hoodlums
    I'm loseing, my orginal gangsta state of mind,
    To advance, I strike back with fantastic ryhmes
    Some niggas call me the poet, they say i can't really flow it
    But my lyrics paralyze spinal cords and determine rap quotas
    Inspirational, passional, emotional, controlled by no one
    I got songs for days cause i'm powered by the sun
    Absorb solar energy to fight foes and defeat m.c.'s
    Fuck the master, I'm the king of all ceremonies
    Unatural disaster, I'll prove you wordplay is phony,
    Mimicry is prohibited beyond this point
    I'm shootin near my best, accurate, don't test my joint
    Come with double wesson's, teachin niggas the lessons
    Of the rapid lessening of the hip hop essence
    The assasins are on the horizon, lets combine and make triumph
    Attack perpendicuraly ,at once, Form a everlasting alliance
    Until they die we will overload, their memory capacity
    With vivid images imprented with a victory, a deadly tactic
    The'll never forget the day we all took over
    Rehabed the radio industry, tv, and media sober
    Now show me a fake rapper that can even step close
    If you do I'll resign from my title, and vanish like a ghost
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 06-21-2006 at 05:28 PM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    i like it. u don't rap tho?

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    No i don't rap for real. I just write to pass the time.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Default The warrior

    I just made a little verse about some guy who killed a whole army by his self and went on to rule the world. Just bored.

    Pernicous attacks striked easily penetrated armor
    Resistants, non existant, the outcome was barring
    One versus a thousand, posed only a small task
    A combo of past tactics, devolped potent sword crafts
    The magic commanded by the masses was severly outmacthed
    Tragicly they were abandoned support from their country is what they lacked
    The warrior that killed the whole army, had blood dripping garmets
    Despite a fighting adoration, his actions were the farthest
    Thing from humaine, weilding the force of several hurricanes
    He murdered entire provinces, no one could oppose his domain
    Domination of all nations, a basic oasis is what he embraced
    Disliking competetion, his hatred led to the extermination of the races
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Nice style the way you wrote this verse. Interesting concept and imagination. Its a nice verse on thought that you hjad explained what it was about. Keep to that style. Would like to see more of you verse...

    Peace
    PS: Keep up the good work and keep posting.

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    I bet he was great at fucking chicks aswell.

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    Thanx for the feedback.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Default Wu banga's elan

    First verse is shity but the second and last are better


    First pick in the draft, Raps used as a haft
    High potential but lowclass, fuck attitude and habits
    Stealthy enough to snatch rabbits
    While attacking fleeing rappers, utilizing crafts and black magic
    Steal baggage, infect cabbage, with homicdal tactics
    Got the smooth cool tunes, perfomed on full moons
    Master deadly moves, portray styles...lampoon
    Your doom, inevitable, Your family, undefendable
    Kill each and every associated, but only if expendable
    Have dependable prisoners of many rap battles
    Conquered and ruled over, but its just natural
    The strong rule the weak, motivational words i speak
    Talent pipes i leak, to leave you knee deep,in defeat


    Verse 2

    Straight from 513, reppin the Walnut hills
    Got the plasma pill ryhmes that emit many chills
    Seems to me, by every rap made, I ameliorate
    Continual advance, change premeditated fates
    Destroy mc's alias, with hated vocabulary
    Without using metaphors my lines still be heavy
    And i'm strong enough to support a whole solar system
    Music planets feed of my light, only form of logistics
    Statistics, of your past victories, weren't very amazing
    Load the verbal clip, hip hop bullets, I'm blazing
    Beware of razing ahead, all who apposed are now dead
    My interpositions...consistent, containing massive lead
    The propositions presented the position to dominate the mission
    Role of the overseer, made sure we fought with persistents
    With a mini army armed with bombs, kill nonchalantly
    Haunting the danger zone, but fight only to pardon thee (mind liberator)


    Verse 3


    This is just my elan, don't need a whole clan
    Without grease in the pan, i still fried your man
    My style goes from complex to very simple
    but still no profanity, preserve sanity inputs
    Plus its orginal, first archetype, lyrics stay ripe
    Ready to slay a mc easily, with or without a mic
    But were's the hype at? were's the dikes at?
    And that pimp talk rap, that many say i lack
    Its true that i slack when it comes to spittin foul raps
    But these tabular array of lines, are formatted for impact
    Match that without sustaining a major setback, impossible
    Cuz i will always attack rapid, leaving sharks in animal hospitals


    Thats it
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 07-19-2006 at 08:51 PM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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