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    exlposion of lyrical trojans holdin like the boys in 'Nam
    comin thru with bloody hooks like 1, and 2 in the poison clan
    no shame fellas, blow like propane prepellers(sp?)
    we dope cocaine sellers, u couldnt battle reign with an umbrella
    keep tryin bitch we li'ble to switch and pry u with sticks
    u wanna hang with BOM? leave yo ass tied to the wick
    ill bang ya moms, and lie like a spick "she on jus for fun"
    but i was caught by a judge, u were pronounced my dishonerable son
    and fuck a ghost, if u tuck a toast u better bust and blast
    cuz when dusk approach, u cood only fuckin hope ya luck will last
    it wont i assure u ghost, im hype on DDD ritalin
    ill chew ur soul, spit it in a body and kill it again
    militant gentlemen, jab a blade in ur abs for play
    and if u actin gay ill put the strap to ya face like a masqurade
    makin sharp deposits of hardened darts spit, u quotin em
    lathargic artist rippin Ghost ribs out to slash ya throat with em.


    sorry for the wait...ghost u up.

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    No Dusk, you don't know me. Honestly you owe me
    So I'll kidnap you and make you watch me fuck your girl friend slowly
    I'll beat you till your nose bleed and make you seek the crossroad
    Tie you to a crusifix and wiegh you down with Tony Starks gold
    Bloodyhookz cut open your throats, Mortal Kombat says finish them
    You lost from the post, so what are we finishing?
    No ones quoting your darts, we leave them stuck to the board
    Furious bars open your heart, intense metaphors fuck up your pores
    Can't beat a ghost son, a soul is forever
    Didn't feel like scolding you or reign 1 on 1 so I scold you together
    Don look at these amateur lines, lets watch the amateurs shine
    Todays Saturday, Its showtime at the apollo, Its amateur time
    The shit you do for free we do for a fee
    Cocaine trafficers? I wonder what these goons will do for a plea
    Dusk sucking, Reigns fucking, they praticed their routine
    End of Discussion, yous nothing, we reign supreme

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    Is this one or two rounds?
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    i say two i like this battle.

    Killbot Beats 2008 NIGGGAAAAAAAAA
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...?bandID=842145
    Lawrlz Ya Sniffs???

    "we laptop nigga, thugs on a computer." -TheShaolinAssassin

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    no, 1 round, it took years toget this one round poppin, imagine another...VOTES.

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    I'm bout too^^
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Reign

    Flow-2.5/5 stretched an uneven
    Concepts/substance-1.5/5 basic an weak
    Metaphors-1/5 basic an weak
    Punches/personals-1/5 basic an weak
    Originality-3/5- descent attempts still basic doe

    Total-9/25

    Dusk
    Flow-4/5-even throughout, a couple stretched
    Concepts/substance-4.5/5- line for line lyricism
    Metaphors-3/5- better than basic-nothin speacial
    Punches/Personals-3/5-verse lacked throro punchlines
    Originality-4/5-no played out concepts cept the nam' line

    Total-18.5/25

    Team total-27.5/50

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    DDD
    Flow-5/5-all lines matched in rhythm
    Concepts/substance-4.5/5-common topics used good
    Metaphors-4/5-pretty good, but could be on a higher level
    Punches/personals-4.5/5- direct an hard, flow helped'em land
    Orginality-3.8/5-common topics like i said, u flipped'em good doe

    Total-21.8/25

    Ghost
    Flow-3.5/5- a couple lines was uneven
    Concepts/substance-4.3/5-fell off at the end, but pretty entertainin
    Metaphors-absent-0/0- can't take off, or give, if u didn't attempt any
    Punches/personal-3.5/5- sum were funny, sum were weak, sum were average
    Originality-5/5-no played out concepts used, all orginal

    Total- 16.3/20* ---not out of 25 cuz he used no metaphors IMO

    Team total-38.1/45*--not 50 cuz^^^


    DDD an gost take this IMO..uno
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    ^^i gave yaw 47 minutes of my time, don't ask me to vote ever again
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mister Big View Post
    ^^i gave yaw 47 minutes of my time, don't ask me to vote ever again
    Lol. thanks for voting though. But damn 47 minutes?

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    ^^^yea but i was doin sumthin else while do this so it took alittle longer than he usual, plus i had to read 4 verses
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    aight, 1-0 in our fav, let's git some more votes so we can close this thread!

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