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    Default Till Meth Do Us Part..

    injected-needle,i Start Grasping~its~hug we Both Share The Passion~of~drugs....//infected-people,embarced In Eac Other Viens As We're Clasping~this~love

    Ma Eyes Tilt Commading This Frame To Lay,she Simles Hope,ma Visions Grazed....//sringe Exits Spilling Out Pain,the Habit Engaged From Chocked Prison Days

    she Admires Over Ma Drug Struck Body,her Eyes Widen~wiht~lust....//time Passes,ma Image Lying~in~dust,the Toxen Circulate Set Out Finding~its~worse

    It Streams A Tidelwave Across And Paraziles Ma Structure To Shake~fit....//votim Sprays,ma Last Days!? Nah I Debate~this, she Speed Dials,words Secure "were Gonna Make It



    The Slient Sirens Suggest Saviour The Flashin Light Fase Fear~and~danger....//bundled In The Back,shirt-open,the Action Flirt-spoken,mind Tripps Everythings Clear~and~stranger

    These Tenticles Attach~to~machines,begin To Loss Conscieness Contacting~these~dreams....//
    She Beats Ma Chest Relaps~she~screams,the Last Drivin Event Prehapse~its~seems

    Ambulance Stalls To Spit Me Out,doctors Hold Sides,gaping Entrance she Welcomes~me~in....//all Pains Gone By Now,on Death Bed,only Hurt Was When I Felt~them~thro~sin

    Heart Whimpers Lifes Sorrows Decrease~met,look Leftwards To See A Nurse Dressed Like A Priest~ess....//
    At Ma Own Funeral!?wheres Am Family!? Nah Aight It,sheholds Ma Hand I Aint Desised~yet

    Emergency Room Wallpaper,the Same Nurse Cluthes Fibulators Like Wedding Rings Says "does Anyone Object?"....//deaths Carryon~subject,am Hand In Hand With The Afterlife Murdered By A Drug,herion~suspect

    The Last Struggle To Fight,parrying~meth,lungs Collapse There Arms Cant Carry~ma~breath....//so "whats The Answer" No Choice,foreced To Say Yes At Marrying~death
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    feed!?~@
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    Default Wanted For Christmas

    Robber.

    robbers Conscience

    Wanted For Christmas~@

    These Drugs Fuel This Fugitive Manhunt Surronded By Wanted~signs....//the Next Store Am A Robb~em~blind And Keep Spooked With This Haunted~mind

    Been On The Run For Months Ma Career~flopped,over Now No Tears~dropped....//i Care Less About Existence Dauntless As All Fears~stopped

    Cant Escape~the~visions,ma Fate~alone~in~prison!?no Chance No Hope~when~am~living!....//christmas Time Full Of Joy!?negative As A Buy A This Rifle Scope~for~thanksgivin

    Go Through The Robbery In Ma Head In How Am A Draw Steady And Leavem Dead....//but Doubts Come In To Collide.fuck That! Am Raw! Ready To Bleed Em Red

    Lock~the~gauge,time To Stock~the~wage, Keep Compused And Block~this~rage....//am A Shock~front~page And Pop~cunts~face No Cops~in~place To Stop~this~case!

    I Was Pissed~at~birth Feel Less Agressive Today Tho Lucky For The Shopkeeper,missed~the~worst....//skimask Fashion Itchin Ma Face,deep Breath..then Burst In Pistol~first

    "yo Cunt Face You About To Get Wasted,this Bag! Money Place~it....//the Infa-red Dont Miss Kid Face~it,just Pay Before A Spray~shit

    Bag Filt~in~seconds,no Guilt~a~recon, Fastest Job Yet As A Scather....//"feel Sorry Or Proud",,the Latter,]"damm What Actions For A Father"


    Block That Shit Out I Left For The Right~reasons Left Her A Night~bleedin With Quiet~breathing....//she Wants You Home Wanted Signs On Milk Cartoons Dark Days But Christmas The Light Season


    No Turning Back Now Ma Pregnant Wife Carrys A Bastard As Ma Heart Pump Faster....//to Think The Last Time She Told Me We Were A Family I Laughed~at~her

    Damm!
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    rates and qoutes n shit

    ????
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    Default Lifes Game Of Chess...

    racisms Chess Blacks~on~whites,clashes Peace,weapons Gats~and~knifes....//built Up Anger Racks~up~strife,hard Headed Belivers Act On There False Facts~of~life

    Even Kings And Queens Take~sides In Fates~pride,thats How Princess Diane Died....//pregnant To A Arab While Still In A White Royal Family!?nah That Aint Gonna Slide

    Chases~by~press? Or When She Kept Eye Connect With The Queen Had She Faced~her~death?....//life Had Paced~its~breath,the Night Skies Brought Harm Thro Tunnel And Spaced~her~chest

    Popes Words Got Him Wearing Bulletproof Vest In Islam....//his Own Wisdom Had Prisioned His Visions Which Was Held In His Palm

    So Lifes Game~of~chess Gotta Put The Blame~to~rest ,deface It And Replace Shit.....//but We All Gotta Face It We All Racist
    "A LOST SOUL ON DEATHS PAROLL"

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    Default The Lost Soul..

    Pacman Aka The Grim Raper
    ya Dog Walkers With Plans~to~rap~shit,strecthed Lines Got Ya Fans~of~black~whips....//but Grim Hungry And Ahead Of His Time Like Advent Calenders In The Hands~of~fat~kids..!

    I Be Filling Keys Like Stuntin~computers.up On Ya Idols I Bump~thro~ya~tutors....//ya Frontings~minewt~cuz,grim Always Aim Hype Like He Drunk~with~them~luggers..!

    Flames Vent~thro~patiences,am Past Underground Status I Went~two~stations....//and This Kid Degranged Call Me Fucking Crazy Like Intercorse With Mental~patiences..!

    Teeth Shatter When A Feed~bars Fucking Connected To The Street That A Bleed~tar....//and Damm Kid We All No There No Great Without G.r..!

    Check The Time~bee,grim Shine I Leave Ya Blind~see Cor Blimey...//dark Minded And Grimey That Even Rays Of Lights Cant Find~me

    This Kid Reach~stardom While Ya Herbs Washed Up In The Beach~garden....//own Point Always Spit Spectucular Like Kids With Speach~problems..!

    Soon To Be A Dad Ages 20 Pass On Skills And Show Fetus~something~new....//chill Raps Freezin~cunts~till~blue And Grim Destroy Verses Like Jesus~wasnt~true..!

    You No Am Ill Stallin~the~facts~and~shit While Ya Balling~by~accident....//and All Ma Lines By Sick And Gorey Like Am Callin~the~ambulances



    A Lost Soul But Still Can Kick It

    "A LOST SOUL ON DEATHS PAROLL"

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    Default 13 Of Hearts...

    Sum Sick Shit For U To Sleep On

    Gambler

    "gamblers Concience"



    13 Of Hearts





    I Leave Home On Cold-nights, A Gambles Dream To Roll-dice Hope It Comes True As I Hold-tight....//this Lifestyle Shows A Gold-light I Never Fold-spite The Debt Mountin Its Just There To Flow-fright..

    It Will Be All Right As I Get Drunk To Relax-now-stable As I Take Part In The Craps-table Got A Son To Fend For,"a Good Parent!? Prephaes-unable"....//draining Ma Familys Wealth I Sap-the-mayple Just Addicted Its A Fact-and-labelled Id Scrap-for-play-doe "u Need To Be Smacked-by-fate-yo!!"

    Move To Next Game Up-by-a-grand Aint Going Nowhere Stuck-to-my-hand Go To The Toilet With The Small Bag I Start Gullising-grams.....//look At Myself Who Can Fuck-with-this-man No Cunt Can Rupuse-my-plan Make All This Cash A Purchase-a-van.

    Start-a-bissness When A Mark-ma-winngs Have The Best Crece I Can Park-my-kids-in Am A Spark-a-living With This Chance Am Given.....//"you Trippin Your Sons Home Alone Whos With-him He Stravin Empty Stomach Like The Contents Of Ya Kitchen.."

    Ye A No That,thats How Am Trying To Make Ma Doe Fat "well Just Quit And Transfer-ya-chips....//then Ya Debt U Can Balance-that-shit" Stop Harsing-me-bitch Am On The Final Table Am Advance-then-split This Aint A Romance-so-get Your Hands Off-my-dick

    Soon Ill Be Prancin In Whips "but The Odds-against-me You Can Still Be A Good Dad But Ya Flaws-are-plenty"....//fuck You!am The Best Parent Struggling Single Handedly Its Just That God-resents-me

    Am Raw And Empty "now Feel How Your Child-straves Crouched On Cold Floors Till Tiles-carve While Your Miles-apart Just Sittin Piling-cards.....//hiding It By Smiling-hard Noing You Mind-scared Thinkin This The Way Forard Man You Just Blind-pa"

    Shut Up!puttin Me-off-the-prize Straight Stuck In Ma Eyes You I Just Picked Up A Four-of-a-kind All-in!! Now Watch This Ballin!!....//he Calling!?shit Ma Hearts Starts Fallin I Feel Like Crawling Ma Heart Pumps Faster Till Boil-burst......they Other Dude Placed Down The Royal Flush..........................
    "A LOST SOUL ON DEATHS PAROLL"

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    i got u
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    I Leave Home On Cold-nights, A Gambles Dream To Roll-dice Hope It Comes True As I Hold-tight....//this Lifestyle Shows A Gold-light I Never Fold-spite The Debt Mountin Its Just There To Flow-fright..

    (great flow, good use of schemes, ok lyrically 8.5/10)

    It Will Be All Right As I Get Drunk To Relax-now-stable As I Take Part In The Craps-table Got A Son To Fend For,"a Good Parent!? Prephaes-unable"....//draining Ma Familys Wealth I Sap-the-mayple Just Addicted Its A Fact-and-labelled Id Scrap-for-play-doe "u Need To Be Smacked-by-fate-yo!!"

    (Descent lyrics, good use of schemes, descent punchline 8.5/10

    Move To Next Game Up-by-a-grand Aint Going Nowhere Stuck-to-my-hand Go To The Toilet With The Small Bag I Start Gullising-grams.....//look At Myself Who Can Fuck-with-this-man No Cunt Can Rupuse-my-plan Make All This Cash A Purchase-a-van.

    (Lyrics are begining to be controlled by schemes, taking away from it, 7.8/10)

    Start-a-bissness When A Mark-ma-winngs Have The Best Crece I Can Park-my-kids-in Am A Spark-a-living With This Chance Am Given.....//"you Trippin Your Sons Home Alone Whos With-him He Stravin Empty Stomach Like The Contents Of Ya Kitchen.."

    (ok metaphor, gettin the point easy, descent lyrics, good schemes, 8.5/10)

    Ye A No That,thats How Am Trying To Make Ma Doe Fat "well Just Quit And Transfer-ya-chips....//then Ya Debt U Can Balance-that-shit" Stop Harsing-me-bitch Am On The Final Table Am Advance-then-split This Aint A Romance-so-get Your Hands Off-my-dick

    (ok i'm convinced that u didn't grow up speakin english from ur grammar, but i get what ur saying, u use schemes good though, 7.8/10

    Soon Ill Be Prancin In Whips "but The Odds-against-me You Can Still Be A Good Dad But Ya Flaws-are-plenty"....//fuck You!am The Best Parent Struggling Single Handedly Its Just That God-resents-me

    (Real nice substance/lyrics, i got ur point easy, good flow on the closer too,9.5/10)

    Am Raw And Empty "now Feel How Your Child-straves Crouched On Cold Floors Till Tiles-carve While Your Miles-apart Just Sittin Piling-cards.....//hiding It By Smiling-hard Noing You Mind-scared Thinkin This The Way Forard Man You Just Blind-pa"

    (once again, gettin the point of ur lyrics, good flow, good rhyme schemes again, 9,0/10)

    Shut Up!puttin Me-off-the-prize Straight Stuck In Ma Eyes You I Just Picked Up A Four-of-a-kind All-in!! Now Watch This Ballin!!....//he Calling!?shit Ma Hearts Starts Fallin I Feel Like Crawling Ma Heart Pumps Faster Till Boil-burst......they Other Dude Placed Down The Royal

    (real good closer with the loose end rhyme to end it, really like the "ballin" part of that mini verse too, 9.5/10)


    Overall, the only thing i saw bad was the grammar/sentence structre and in a couple early verses u let the schemes controll what u were going to say next, but this overal was a nice piece, 8.8/10
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Thanks Thats What I Was Looking For

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