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    a verse and chorus for a mixtape me and my boy doin

    ill tear your face of cuzzin/
    leave you lookin like you went chain saw jugglin/
    sray bombs, see the napalm bublin/
    got my axe lookin like an insane paul bunyan/
    i dont see your lyrics, like i was ray charles/
    prolly pink in its appearence, covered in gay sparkles/
    carry a knife, im a scarry guy so/
    ill pull the plug on your life, like you was teri shivo/
    im spittin these horror hits/
    leave you hangin from your balls like christmas tree ornamnets/
    its collesum time/
    sceaze your life, i rock the carpe diam mind/
    leave you lookin like barney, purple and green/
    my knife infects with termanil disease/
    slice necks with surgical ease/
    diced heads hang from vertical beams/

    we intellegent heavenly/
    you remeber us like you had an elephant memery/
    make more inscions in your body/
    were like something out the horror visions of Ghotti/
    we psychological crazy/
    so when we say that we'll skin you its a possible maby/
    we got closets of babies/
    chek outside your window we been stalking you latley/

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    Default Re: a drop

    i like it it's good

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    thanks, feed back is always appreciated

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    I liked it, it was some good shit
    You Best Protect Ya Neck!

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    decent... some good lines (though played out) and some filler... some good multies... spellin' was terrible, but i'm picky like that... keep practicin', and you'll definitely get better...

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    Quote Originally Posted by PsYkOsUs
    decent... some good lines (though played out) and some filler... some good multies... spellin' was terrible, but i'm picky like that... keep practicin', and you'll definitely get better...

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    haha, ya i dont usually spell chek my verses... thanks for constructive critisism, i gotta long time to practice and im using every second...

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    Decent shit bro, keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meridian Logix
    haha, ya i dont usually spell chek my verses... thanks for constructive critisism, i gotta long time to practice and im using every second...
    that's what i like to hear...

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    PS. spellcheck is your friend... LOL

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    It was a decent verse, i suppose you were busting. Ya your speeling was not checked. Your content was not creative as i think you are able to . You must improve


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