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    Angry Red Lake

    it was here but now it's gone..........
    Last edited by Slippy The Pimp; 10-25-2006 at 11:14 AM.

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    Default Re: Red Lake

    Nice word effects, and creativity. It seemed a fast life in that verse. But lyrics such as "Honky"? I don't know don't use those too much.

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    Default Re: Red Lake

    Nice, keep it up bro

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    Honky? Watcha you talkin' about willis?
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