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    Exclamation WINNER--------> Mister BigNegroid Czar Vs Unseen

    8 bars (16 lines), 1 round, no feeding, whoever posts a verse first gets the battle.
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 01-08-2007 at 04:51 PM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
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    Fuck wit me, i'll flip on u like little kids gettin shots (vaccine shots)
    Yo fagness shows in yo lines, u give so much head u "spittin" cock//
    U got a none-inch "drumstick", but you "pound" eight "drums"?
    Son, yo mother swallows so much, i heard she piss straight cum//
    I spit so much drug game rap, on my doors, fed's bangin
    If yo peoples try to shake my hand, i'd leave'im "dead hangin"//
    They lames man, why you associate wit these gwop lackers
    Yaw so fake, yaw could be writers for a movie called "block actors"//
    Why u steppin in my ring talkin shit, when my fans sniff coke lines
    Before you could even throw a punch, u hit the canvas fo* times//
    Keep fuckin around, u'll fight the force of real killers, we'll make u toothless
    You could be on life support, i'm still iller, quit fake'in ruthless
    U ina love "triangle", and i'm doin yo bitch from "acute" fuckin angle
    While u gettin pimped, I smash her till the poop's up in her brain yo
    An i don't giva fuck, if these eight bars, leave great scars
    B ain't hard, I can already hear his crew yo, "he raped ours!!"

    *fo (four) pronunced--fo, not just to fit scheme, cuz thats how i would say it anyway -fo
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 01-09-2007 at 03:05 PM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Dead president, resident of an early grave,
    All the money's spent this bitch isn't gettin saved
    Paved a path to his destruction,
    50 piece deposited and his soul's the deduction
    Rhymes under construction like the Big Dig in Boston,
    couldn't finish shit off without it really costin
    Don't want none with this emcee from Austin,
    I stay grindin like Eric Koston
    The only thing kids grindin is his asscheeks in prison,
    Killing kids only when he spits out his cell mates jizm,
    Fake fuck couldn't be hard if he was the curb on the boulevard
    In the prison yard he throwin peace signs like he rolled with Piccard
    Pussy don't want none like a nun who's celibate
    He'd have to get an Aids injection to ever come hella sick
    Now watch him fall like Berlin walls the way this bitch represents
    Next time you battle fucker, you should duct tape in that dick




















    first battle in a long while, had a feelin ol' boy wasn't gonna show soooo, best of 5 in the votes, peace
    Last edited by Visionz; 01-10-2007 at 02:06 AM.

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    Czar/dead president


    Fuck wit me, i'll flip on u like little kids gettin shots (vaccine shots)
    Yo fagness shows in yo lines, u give so much head u "spittin" cock//

    Ight mediorce bar here nothing spectacular but not too bad either.

    U got a none-inch "drumstick", but you "pound" eight "drums"?
    Son, yo mother swallows so much, i heard she piss straight cum//

    Ight 1st line was a lil weird but nice follow up with the 2nd line.

    I spit so much drug game rap, on my doors, fed's bangin
    If yo peoples try to shake my hand, i'd leave'im "dead hangin"//

    this was more of a boast to urself then dissin him. safe


    They lames man, why you associate wit these gwop lackers
    Yaw so fake, yaw could be writers for a movie called "block actors"//

    gwop? wtf is that haha anyway this bar seemed out of place. not likein it


    Why u steppin in my ring talkin shit, when my fans sniff coke lines
    Before you could even throw a punch, u hit the canvas fo* times//

    Again could be re-worded to feel the full effect of the punch. but average bar here

    Keep fuckin around, u'll fight the force of real killers, we'll make u toothless
    You could be on life support, i'm still iller, quit fake'in ruthless

    Ight good flow here, nice multi'z and wat knot. above par bar..
    U ina love "triangle", and i'm doin yo bitch from "acute" fuckin angle
    While u gettin pimped, I smash her till the poop's up in her brain yo

    seems like ur creativity is runnin low a bit. not feelin it really
    An i don't giva fuck, if these eight bars, leave great scars
    B ain't hard, I can already hear his crew yo, "he raped ours!!"

    Average Closer, nothign too fancy at all. just a plain bar.

    Overall:Just alot of average and sum not so good bars. seems like u kinda rushed it a bit and didn't think too hard on ur bars.

    CZAR/DEAD PRESIDENT: 6/10



    Dead president, resident of an early grave,
    All the money's spent this bitch isn't gettin saved

    Ight nice flow to the opener. no real punch tho. but effective sumhow


    Paved a path to his destruction,
    50 piece deposited and his soul's the deduction

    ight str8 punch. nothign too fancy again. safe

    Rhymes under construction like the Big Dig in Boston,
    couldn't finish shit off without it really costin

    NO

    Don't want none with this emcee from Austin,
    I stay grindin like Eric Koston

    NO

    The only thing kids grindin is his asscheeks in prison,
    Killing kids only when he spits out his cell mates jizm,

    Ight feelin this. was nice

    Fake fuck couldn't be hard if he was the curb on the boulevard
    In the prison yard he throwin peace signs like he rolled with Piccard

    Ight Decent again good flow n all

    Pussy don't want none like a nun who's celibate
    He'd have to get an Aids injection to ever come hella sick

    Ight played bar but still decent

    Now watch him fall like Berlin walls the way this bitch represents
    Next time you battle fucker, you should duct tape in that dick

    Umm..below avearage closer wasn't feelin it..

    Overall: U should have warmed up a bit b4 battleing but i guess this was ur warm up? no bars were really hard hittin and nothing worth mentioning seems like u rushed it even faster then Czar/Dead.

    Overall: 5/10

    MY VOTE: Czar/Dead CLOSE battle

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    coo then, votes
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
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    i would love to vote on this batle but dead president just voted against me on one of my battles.......so i wouldnt want it to be considered like a hating vote........so i will just make comments but i "WILL NOT" vote..........


    i think its not neccesary when u write a text battle, to put quotations around your words, or to make words in bold print, and worse of all, to go on and explain what a word meant, like this from dead president................


    *fo (four) pronunced--fo, not just to fit scheme, cuz thats how i would say it anyway -fo



    everyone knows what fo means


    or when u said in the 1st line ................


    Fuck wit me, i'll flip on u like little kids gettin shots (vaccine shots)



    thos kinda things are not neccesary, u should spit it clean and leave it up for interpritation............if someone is stupid enough not to understand what u meant, then fuck them, whether u win or loose, when u drop fire, people will recognize and remember that, so dont try and go out of your way to explain what every word meant, or if u use slang, what that slang word means, the people that are with the program will recognize your talents............thats just my 2 cents.............no vote from me................
    but see i gotta get paid fully... whether its truthfully or untruthfully.
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    ^^^true, but i want everbody to get what i'm saying clearly. i always put quotations around my words that have a double meaning so i don't have to just say what i mean about it, i can just put the quotes on it and then the person will stop an think about for a sec then get it. Like this line:

    If yo peoples try to shake my hand, i'd leave'im "dead hangin"//

    I put quotes around dead hangin becuase it has two meanings, i'd leave them dead hangin meaning i'd wouldn't shake their hand and i'd leave the hangin. And the second meaning, i'd leave the dead hangin from a tree, dead hangin. I just want people to know what words have more than one meaning to it so i throw some quotations on it just so they don't miss it. Because if they miss one of the two meanings, the punch is worthless.


    And the bolding is really just for showing schemes cuz some of them like this line get complex:
    Keep fuckin around, u'll fight the force of real killers, we'll make u toothless
    You could be onlife support, i'm still iller, quit fake'in ruthless


    THis is really the only line that needs to be bold, cuz i want readers to see exactly how many words i'm rhyming in the bar (2 lines). THat's the reason for bolding.
    Last edited by Bigot Hitman; 01-11-2007 at 09:42 AM.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    flow: president
    punches: tie
    personals: president
    multis: president
    vocab: krazi
    enjoyment: president

    vote: president.


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    If u look close, eric unseen dropped a verse, krazi never showed till too late. But either way- 1-0
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Thanx bra, 2-0
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Unseen- do u wanna do best of 3 which means a two vote knockout. Or a 5 vote round, with 3-votes being the knock out figure?
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    3-0 being a knockout, my battles lines is rusty, haha

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    THe two active battles i got going are my first real ones. I'm bout to start another thread up too. It's exam week, so after the test when i just gotta sit their quiet an shit, i've been writing battle verses. So i got 4 battle verses from this week so far, and i just spit two on these two battles.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    ehh, I just sit down a put whatever comes to mind, course, I've been writin for a long ass time so it just get easier as time goes on. I was real tired when I had wrote this one, kinda shows in a line or two. btw......that first vote seems kinda fishy, I mean he broke it down & everything but when they're not payin enough attention to even know the name of who's battlin makes me wonder if they even read the verses...........to say you got me in the personals when you didn't even know who your opponent was when you wrote your verse makes it even more suspect. I'm just pointin' it out but I'll let you be the judge of it Prez. I'm not up for crying 'bout shit nawmean.

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    Aite, its 1-0, i'll ask him to reconsider his vote.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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