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Thread: WINNER--------> Mister BigNegroid Czar Vs Unseen

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    flow-unseen
    pnchs-czar
    crtvty-tie
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    wrdply-unseen

    ok unseen gets my vote because it was nice and eazy...no theatricals, it was straight to the point killer, still rusty as hell but, my pick.

    and at the end of the day, the bolding and shit gets played cuz if the verse is good enuff u dont have to stress what rhymes, but no offense at all cuz ur verse was still good, also the flow was a little over the top...lessen the amount of words in a line....good battle...1

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    1-1
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
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    flow: czar
    punches: tie
    personals: czar
    multis: czar
    vocab: unseen
    enjoyment: czar

    vote: czar.

    soz got confused by all this name change....and i always read the verses btw, it aint a hard thing to do. peace!


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    Thanx for doin yo vote over, 2-1 me
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Czar/dead president


    Fuck wit me, i'll flip on u like little kids gettin shots (vaccine shots)
    Yo fagness shows in yo lines, u give so much head u "spittin" cock//

    Ight mediorce bar here nothing spectacular but not too bad either.

    U got a none-inch "drumstick", but you "pound" eight "drums"?
    Son, yo mother swallows so much, i heard she piss straight cum//

    Ight 1st line was a lil weird but nice follow up with the 2nd line.

    I spit so much drug game rap, on my doors, fed's bangin
    If yo peoples try to shake my hand, i'd leave'im "dead hangin"//

    this was more of a boast to urself then dissin him. safe


    They lames man, why you associate wit these gwop lackers
    Yaw so fake, yaw could be writers for a movie called "block actors"//

    gwop? wtf is that haha anyway this bar seemed out of place. not likein it


    Why u steppin in my ring talkin shit, when my fans sniff coke lines
    Before you could even throw a punch, u hit the canvas fo* times//

    Again could be re-worded to feel the full effect of the punch. but average bar here

    Keep fuckin around, u'll fight the force of real killers, we'll make u toothless
    You could be on life support, i'm still iller, quit fake'in ruthless

    Ight good flow here, nice multi'z and wat knot. above par bar..
    U ina love "triangle", and i'm doin yo bitch from "acute" fuckin angle
    While u gettin pimped, I smash her till the poop's up in her brain yo

    seems like ur creativity is runnin low a bit. not feelin it really
    An i don't giva fuck, if these eight bars, leave great scars
    B ain't hard, I can already hear his crew yo, "he raped ours!!"

    Average Closer, nothign too fancy at all. just a plain bar.

    Overall:Just alot of average and sum not so good bars. seems like u kinda rushed it a bit and didn't think too hard on ur bars.

    CZAR/DEAD PRESIDENT: 6/10



    Dead president, resident of an early grave,
    All the money's spent this bitch isn't gettin saved

    Ight nice flow to the opener. no real punch tho. but effective sumhow


    Paved a path to his destruction,
    50 piece deposited and his soul's the deduction

    ight str8 punch. nothign too fancy again. safe

    Rhymes under construction like the Big Dig in Boston,
    couldn't finish shit off without it really costin

    NO

    Don't want none with this emcee from Austin,
    I stay grindin like Eric Koston

    NO

    The only thing kids grindin is his asscheeks in prison,
    Killing kids only when he spits out his cell mates jizm,

    Ight feelin this. was nice

    Fake fuck couldn't be hard if he was the curb on the boulevard
    In the prison yard he throwin peace signs like he rolled with Piccard

    Ight Decent again good flow n all

    Pussy don't want none like a nun who's celibate
    He'd have to get an Aids injection to ever come hella sick

    Ight played bar but still decent

    Now watch him fall like Berlin walls the way this bitch represents
    Next time you battle fucker, you should duct tape in that dick

    Umm..below avearage closer wasn't feelin it..

    Overall: U should have warmed up a bit b4 battleing but i guess this was ur warm up? no bars were really hard hittin and nothing worth mentioning seems like u rushed it even faster then Czar/Dead.

    Overall: 5/10

    MY VOTE: Czar/Dead CLOSE battle

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom


    Take ya life plus ya afterlife -Bloodshed

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    Good shot on the vote, i got lucky cuz i came soft wit that verse.3-1, battle over.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    Shit i don't know, i just started battelin on this site, we agreed on a 3 vote knock out, if its to five then this battle will take years
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    yep, game over haha, gotta get that sword sharper here, haven't battled in months, respect though Czar, peace

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