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    Infrared thread aimed at middle of foreheads
    Blood bath, arms open with wings spread
    Hot slugs melting mugs like molten drugs
    2007 Hezbollah Revolutionist terrorizing like 9/11
    Hell on earth, war in heaven
    Heat in hand, Operation Quicksand
    Battles breaking out in Baidoa, Kalaber
    MiG warplanes shooting down Apache helicopters
    Taliban Military Commander, Cali Pit-Bull Handler
    Anatomy spreader, breaking femurs like Schwarzenegger
    Mayhem Maniac, mania raps is the line of attack
    Packed axe in my combat sack to hack shoulder straps
    Solar panel beams sharper than scalpel candles
    Severing spinal cords from spinal canals
    Arizona thug rebel spitting flame metal
    Johnny Mnemonic Marvel comics Iron Man terrorist
    Arsenic lyrics, delusion monothematic, psychotic logic
    Rebellious visions of disorder and anarchy
    Wildcat from here to Kentucky like Walter McCarty
    Born into vast plains of fire with horror being my legacy
    Gutters embrace the slaughtered when my dagger utters
    I’m like Iraqi law, death sentence carried out within 30 days
    Hazed with craze is how I was wildly raised
    Now I’m in the age of the perilous atomic rage
    This violent sanctuary leads to the insane
    Vile and genocidal lunatic shall only reign
    I engrave searing mics to Holocaust grave sites
    Spread hate like al-Qeada odium videotapes
    Son of perdition on the wings of abomination
    Atheistic passion breathes a wave of persecution
    Detonation of bombs in succession at intersections
    Vaginal animal, hyena devouring female emcees birth canals
    Thunderbolt visual evolution after volcanic flow glows
    I hem ion beams with Leatherface’s sewing machine
    Electric current wire-tapping, master of disguise
    Brian De Palma “Wise Guys” left with wide eyes
    After getting throats cut with Columbian neck ties
    Bullet stray ‘Raid’ like roach spray
    On impact brains levitate from cranial frame like David Blaine
    Battlecats with no shields get caps peeled
    Eyes paralyzed, zombies screaming, souls cry
    Minds blown with rhymes designed like land mines

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    Not bad dude. I would say most aspects of that verse are on the positive side. Not a bad style you're using there. Kind of quick loosely linked thoughts. It seemed to flow pretty well. Good choice of words too. From what I recall you may have said previously that you are quite new to this? If that is the case then I can definately see you penning some tight shit a little further down the line.


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    Thanks for the feed. No disrespect duke - just been extremely busy. Yeah - I've been reppin' in this bloodsport for about 1/2 year. I started writing ruck in June of 2006. This lyrical novice is a quick learner. My objective, and what I'm striving for is to one day be able to hold my own against Wu Corp.'s tightest lyricists. It's an attainable goal, since I'm my harshest critic and am inspired by all that participate in this website. One can only be motivated by the ruckus that's written in here.

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