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    Yo 16 bars, tell me wats up.ct was good.



    ayo its yaboy smoke to da E
    Choke on da trees I roll up dem Gs
    I roll wit some Gs that aint hold no heat
    But if yall wanna compete, get thrown in defeat
    Yall stay in yo seat yall boyz are weak
    Gain some muscle and come back in a week
    I stay on my hustle got stacks of dat green
    Sell all my dubs to the cats and da fiends
    Im big Macing it seems how I stay wit da cheese
    Da haze got me cream, no team I am solo
    Rollin in da dough-lo, stay low around the po-po
    Is my bankroll slow?no , da mo money I get da more hungry I get
    Aint even funny, its sick, the way im pilin chips
    Its the smile I get for every dime that I flip
    Dat makes me keep pushin, and supplyin my shit
    So when I die, im known for grindin, not just some guy in a ditch

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    yo feedback . ya herd

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    that wasnt bad. the rhymes were solid but they were kind of simple. maybe try to add some multies and hit it with some rhyme schemes. as far as the subject matter ya know it really wasnt my thing. im not into writing about that kinda stuff. but you pulled it off, so yeah my only advice is try to make in unisyllabic and i think youve got potential.

    could you drop some feed on my post too? thanks bro.
    Last edited by jallainINS; 01-20-2007 at 11:46 AM.
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