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    Default We Got It Locked

    We got it locked like a crowd of dreads
    The music is loud to shred
    Thru the black cloud over my head
    My heart is proud but if bled
    Cause its broken covered in bloodshed
    I think like Malcolm X on point with lead
    Act like Detroit Red out for joints and bread
    And speak like El-Hajj Malik Shabazz
    Bring heat to last to beat the crass
    Standing on my feet till the last
    Days cause these cats are weak and ass acting brand new
    I stand true cause a Stan I might knew
    Would force my hand to do what I have to do
    Listening to the Who sober or bent the God sent
    With the hunger and mental strength
    To sustain from hate for freedom and estates
    Like Harriet Tubman so I can escape
    From the belly of the beast grim fate
    Just wait man to lead hand in hand
    The mentally enslaved to the promise land real bold
    Thru the Underground Railroad
    To get the major fold on the right train of thought
    That canít be bought but is always sought for to uplift the will
    Prophecy fulfilled to pay my bills
    I must say Iím skilled
    My life I lay on the line for dollar bills


    Thank you for absorbing light I shine. Peace

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    The best thing i can say is the flow was consistent for alot of the lines, metaphors were simple, no true wordplay, and played out concepts. 5/10
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    lol, yeah alright, I appreciate the feedback. I could learn a lot from "cops think Im like a empty starch can, an i wont "spray." Genius. Peace

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