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    Default ill thoughts and ill minds

    In tha sectah-i microphone wreck-swing skulltors sceptors-
    set death mode phasers-who pull out da swords braver-
    bastard heart blazah hell spawn soul absorb drain ya-
    invincible watch da earth shatter-ultimate nullifier-
    but i'm tha cajun-i got the beast inside tha coat-
    i be phasing like what i got ta smoke-cant be seen-
    camoflage sagat tiger pokes-cloaked- spittin some flames-
    you snakes will get craned-for shame-trying to run game-
    like paper scissors and rocks-i play niggas lasers and gloccs-
    wizards versus warlocks-battle fields be filled wit street warlords-
    decapatatin ya whole horde-i'm on horse back like the 4th disciple-
    dimesional shift-ninja mist poisonous geisha bliss-in tha realms-
    the void ayo ya brains will get split-avoid-yeild before my grey teck-
    now you see me in 4:3 aspect ratio-jack da rippa-
    nah i'll straight scrape a nigga-standin there lookin like C 3 P OH!!!-
    press the arpeiago-i'll have you chockin on your own depression-
    tha black jago-burning tha garcia vega-rockin wu fabrication-
    syndication-inject heroine inside ya veins like enemy's in narc-
    sparkin blunts in the dark-sirens had me shook-then i saw bitches playing harps-
    i'm like kabal with saws-claws that rise from underneath ya-
    cuttin herbs like strider-insider-hang glider-shurkens and smoke bombs-
    i'm swift-tokuyo drift-c and rips rep we hellbent-2 cups of blood-
    drink em out of the predators skulls-i'm keepin it raw-

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    "Come as you are" Bigot Hitman's Avatar
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    Damn, after the first line i saw u fixed up your flow an shit, and it didn't stray for the whole verse, I like the hardcore appeal u put out on this, lyrically it tops ur other one by like 5 times, i thought u was wack from that other one, but u pretty good.

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    syndication-inject heroine inside ya veins like enemy's in narc-
    sparkin blunts in the dark-sirens had me shook-then i saw bitches playing harps-

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    In tha sectah-i microphone wreck-swing skulltors sceptors-
    set death mode phasers-who pull out da swords braver-

    Overall-8.5
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
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    damn that was raw as hell! i think that rhyme would lose niggaz but im feelin it! Crazy imagery. I'll give it a 7/10
    Call me Sun cuz I shine like 1!!!!!!!!!!!!

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