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    Default The art of mind journey

    Here's some lines I dropped in the "dojo"-thread earlier this day.
    Just hit me up with your view on these - much love

    When I
    meditate in the dojo, my mind's at the estate's
    gate of my soul, not solo, they conjugate
    as mind hovers over fine waters of my spring
    it's tears of a father hearing his blind daughter sing
    the fusion shows it like a zoom ----- clearly
    picture's weaved severely in the loom 'n stirs me
    I never believed I would ever be complete
    endeavor me achieve masterhood cleverly
    this is the art of mind journey, mighty learning
    combined with finding designs, then u-turning
    cause home's the place where your heart is
    face it, you cannot apart these, truth is basic
    knowledge drawn at the sky like rasters
    where my mind flies reminds me of my master
    "Going on means going far, going far means returning"
    see with your heart 'n your sight be discerning
    Look at my nephew, he jumped at the window just to see you (The Sun - Ghostface, Rza, Raekwon and Slick Rick)

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    Default Re: The art of mind journey

    2nd verse:

    Discover your heart to master, your thoughts are cars
    driving on tha intercity-route "blood pressure" far faster
    than on any alley to tha abdomen or your guts throwing
    darts at your belly's core hard, man, get the omen:
    nothing is just nuts if you have a chest
    no cardiac failures if you only arrest
    your impulsions, caprices ----- dull hypothesis
    what you need is no Jesus but love expertises
    in a world full of hatred and lies, beware that eyes
    and ears won't be faked by supplies and tears
    I wish they were glasses of truth and lie-detectors
    sly man know alone your heart's a wise protector


    Come on, show some love for that
    Look at my nephew, he jumped at the window just to see you (The Sun - Ghostface, Rza, Raekwon and Slick Rick)

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    Default Re: The art of mind journey

    I think the first verse had more meaning than the second. And it had its own reality (the first verse). Keep posting. Nice verse (the first). Gave a unpersidented approach to the way you put it accross

    Peace

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    i liked both of those verses a lot. you got a nice flow to it. post up some more, these are good. the first one especially had some good lines

    peace

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    Both of you, thank you very much indeed, it's good to get some feedback.
    Contact me if you did not understand everything, or let us discuss it here - cheers!
    Look at my nephew, he jumped at the window just to see you (The Sun - Ghostface, Rza, Raekwon and Slick Rick)

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    This was hot slept on!



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    Hell razah

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    yo this some deep shit ,i think i m gettin a bit of it ,yo mind at yo soul,s gate ,do you mean you are gettin deep into your mind to try n really know who you are or something like that,nway its deep activates the brain cell tryna catch the story peace son.

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    Default Re: The art of mind journey

    yo , both verses were on point , the flow was easily found and the rhymes were pretty good , keep it up!

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