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    come to EgWest you might git shanked to shreds wit an icepick/
    got goonies on the strip collectin' bread on the night shift/
    Joe Pesci style, they'll put your head in a vice grip/
    so don't test me pal or end up dead in a pipe ditch/
    explosion from your hundred watt bulbs, you hit the light switch/
    corrosion out your bludgeoned popped skull, you twitchin' lifeless/
    Kwai Chang Kaine palm smacks snap your brittle neck/
    I'll snatch your heart and eat it in lesser than half a millasec/
    you lack the intellect, skill and knowledge to battle me/
    I posess the ill ebonics that involve wit fatality/
    rappin' 'bout my fuckin' myspace page, homie you upset?/
    'cause I'm averaging 500 plays a day, and you ain't git a buzz yet/
    Hookz'll break your back and pull your spine from the belly/
    you git the meat grinder 'til they find you twined into deli/
    click the kalichnikov and finish off the ruccus you started/
    you're like William Hung having sex....... FUCKIN' RETARDED!!!
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    bloodyhookz got SKILLZ,
    .......................^all caps

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    fuck it.... ill go all out


    massacre manz method to - many million molecules
    challenger clanz get severed,i surgicaly remove all ya hair follicles
    k damager slams in secondz, chemicaly castrate hookz rap chronicles
    slice your gellotine belly, an staple medicaly mutated abdominals
    light some kerosine jellY, egwests explosion be phenominal
    trapped for weeks under debris, an mistook donz dick for a popsical
    gave it a try, sucked it dry "yo hook be economical,
    i gotta feed the rest of west my liquid anatomical"
    your cliche shit be comical, mine mentally unstoppable
    linguisticly logical, boy bow to the son prodigal
    decomposed flesh is your only biological... next of kin
    bust necks, life of sin, buck ya mamz hide the skin
    she wakes up "deadly grin" i pinned her lips with glue,screws n saftey pins
    homeboy you worship sun kings ya backwards like yang ying
    my ice stone fist, be like releasing the ghetto streets of bejing
    when my ninja come for ya ass, they deliver a silent was-ting!
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    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
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    ^nice dart sk-

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    lets get sum votes in on mine an hookz last verses


    peace
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    U lose again^^ punches are weak...again
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    whatever big...it beats any of your shit


    peace
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    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    Real talk? These two battles was way back in january, an since i write almost everyday, i'm way better than i was back then, but still my older shit tops yo newest shit ya mean...

    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=32089
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31544
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    i aint a battle emcee.....but at least i dont drop the same type of shit the headz in wucorp drop.. an the last verse i typed rips the shit ive seen on your "clips" (an the links you posted contain shit battle rhymes, why show me that SHIT)

    peace
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    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    I showed you that shit so you know that your shit is on a way lower level than my shit. Now i know you know, cuz u've been to my "mister big's clips" thread, even tho i don't expect u to admit it, or even show respect, that's straight tho cuz its obvious that u shitball to me, and that's all i care about. Real talk.
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    whatever the fuck you say...... the last verse i dropped beats the shit ive read on your thread..i aint tryin to shitball you...you on real talk? ill give you real talk, ive seen your shit a million times(nothing special) my battle verses are not the best iam not sayin they are...but your verses dont stand out to me at all.....constructive critisism dont take offence


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    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    How could i take feedback from a duke who can't write, an thinks that his wack ass lines is better than mines, an if you read shit in my thread, all the stuff startin on page 7 to 31 is a million times better than anything i've read from u, u won't admit that, but like i said i don't expect u too, just know that i know you know, ya know?
    The dealer of hope is selling me lies
    Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise
    This life was never mine, the rivers never ran
    Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands
    Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed
    For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman)
    http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61

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    No...
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    but at least i dont drop the same type of shit the headz in wucorp drop
    Do you know how retarded that sounds? I mean, seriously, you come through with a few clever lines here and there but it's the same big word searching shit we've all read a hundred times before. It's like every kid who has himself a thesaurus thinks he can sit down a write dope lines.

    Either way, again my vote goes for hookz. His style just lends itself more to the battle rap and therefore, punchlines. While you have a few good ones I must admit. Like the "deadly grin" line I liked. Hookz just better with the punches.

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    appreciate the constructive feedback acid...but i dont know how many times i have to say this i never read a thesaurus or dictionary, this is my lingo, my vocab, its how i speak/rap......an what can i say.... hookz is a killa battle emcee, but it was worth a try


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    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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