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    These are some pretty nice flows. Most these verses would present well in audio. I like the style used. Seems to be mostly loose, unconnected subject matter. Just flows. I like these verses because although they don't seem to have a direct focus, they're still compiled of interesting references and content. Good work.


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    respect 4 the feedback...i can tell why dudes would think the subject matter is not connected but if you read very carefully youll see what iam on about, but even if catz do i doubt they will be able to decipher, i just write rhymes that i know I understand....i should post more "structured lyrics" from my archive..

    anyway ill break my a rhyme down for you lot

    Extended communication server(a device used to contact a wide array of tagged offenders in seconds) - an illuminated murder( there has been a "stand-out "homicide)
    the machinery(E.C.S) cant contact this devil inflated learner(the ecs cant even contact the tagged killer which shows the killers hiding power, and he is drivin by the power of the devil)
    so we resort to acid, chemicals and bunsun burners (nothing can catch him so we bring out some chemicals and tools of that nature)
    a catylist cocktail of blood spiller gut churner(we make a lethal killing potion)
    planted in the mouth of the killers slut cum slurper (planted a vial of it in a hooker who reguarly fucks the killer)
    she sucked his dick "circa' 8.00am - till it turned purple(she sucked his cock from 8.00 oclock and allowed the posion to go on his dick and turn it purple)
    but not cuz she sucked it mad hard(.......)
    but because the cocktail melted his innards like lard( i turned purple cuz his innards were dicentigrating)
    a coke slinger in past, moved on to rapin hoes n spittin darts(the killer is dead, now the inspector is talking about his past, a coke slinger moved on to raping and rapping)
    but then he got bored and went all out,(.......)
    knifein muthafuckas like a "beanstalk" sprout(he got sick of raping and moved on to killing people, beanstalk sprout - the chinnese vegatable that is very thin and moist)
    meantalk ended, time for real action clout(he had enough of organised murder, and moved on to pychopathic shit)
    challenging civillians to a 3 round death bout( like jumping at random people and fighting them in a death bout)

    so its basically a story of a mas killer from his last murder to his death
    Last edited by SID; 05-14-2007 at 07:11 AM.
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    omega faction be at the release party
    no captions just snobby half deceased arty
    manz,.... hollerin at katz to conform
    to a media system that leaves them empty and torn
    we said "man we here to make real music'
    he systematicaly replied 'when you got power you abuse it"
    misuse it,.. to the point of no return
    thats when we jumped out and took a sudden u turn
    out the district, the area,and location
    made a pact to never deal with a seedy cocasion
    they got no patience for a brother with skin colour
    just smother with money banter, weights n bother
    my fate aint lookin pituresque
    sell my shit myself for less....... then it took to make
    dreams of fame, money and a world with no hate
    funny dreams like a child to a star
    sunny beams guide god to my heart
    and i wake up and realise it was all fiction
    a boulder off my shoulders and less resistance and friction
    in the kitchen i see my mama gleamin smilin and understand
    all i need is her meaning and kindness
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    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    complex symmetery, geographical contours
    shake the earths state, like a flock of condors
    deflate the birth rate, like a mutated transponder
    "constipateded" fakes, behold redemption yonder
    the lyrical sonar, infecting daydreamin stoners
    your the black tongue owner, and iam the organ donor
    ill give you a "taste" but the decesion is yours to pondor
    when you put pen to paper, youll relise it flows like vapour
    the instigated maker of crafted blasted masses
    smash this class of spazes, with solid forms and liquid gases
    light flashes, inspiration comes in baches
    and then "catches" my mind like burning thatches
    "burning" smashes, lash and dash with silent slashes
    my task be like stashes of hash, it keeps stackin
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    yo yo yo

    flourishing leaf farm
    brandishing the heat palm
    its neat and calm, like the guerillas of vietnam
    rolling cess with the lotion of palm
    your flow are disarm, with a corrosion bomb and bleak charms
    ring the burglar alarm, and bring your third arm
    word son, sing along with my song
    that echoes falling blades dug from the grave of saddam
    mental temple firearm, free rental of dire stance
    i git to you free with a bag seedz spars
    slang art, hood shoot apart
    brothas who appeal, evil deals with fallen dartz
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    flourishing leaf farm
    brandishing the heat palm
    its neat and calm, like the guerillas of vietnam
    rolling cess with the lotion of palm
    your flow are disarm, with a corrosion bomb and bleak charms
    ring the burglar alarm, and bring your third arm
    word son, sing along with my song
    that echoes falling blades dug from the grave of saddam
    mental temple firearm, free rental of dire stance
    i git to you free with a bag seedz spars
    slang art, hood shoot apart
    brothas who appeal, evil deals with fallen dartz

    Haaa! Nice



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    yo yo yo

    treestyle.......

    fuck these wack dudes
    buck back the drill and screw
    tuck tack tape round the cold crime clues
    clap slaps on the dime time tools
    stripes of blue, like tribal warfare, lagoon
    coco maroon, compute fondou, iam on you
    with weed flow overview, attidude
    mass decreasing of altitude, its kinda rude
    cuz my art me raw and crude, cellulite prune
    dimples and spoons, fat assses and goons
    ya fam description...untouched and true
    i clutch your crew, dice slice R.A.G.U
    bite ice in the cocaine saloon, slow brain salute
    acid saliva, rancid dilute, prance with the runes in tune
    boom bap kaboom
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    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    ill shit sid fureal..yo u do audio now right? we should collab on a joint 2gether pm me if u interested ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sleep Sinatra View Post
    ill shit sid fureal..yo u do audio now right? we should collab on a joint 2gether pm me if u interested ...
    iam gonna record on the weekend with my homie, i might do a collab, but i need to hear you first.. naa mean
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
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    alloy pipes, leather gloves and mouthscarf
    "drought laugh", bout 1- death by paragraph
    hospital discharge, gut stuck steel staff
    tape reel barge, ya slut got fucked-semen marsh
    seamen march, with katana blades and illegal arms
    cerebral scars, boxcar bizzare, blizzard wizard
    lethal royalty czar, shake your guitar
    evil needle memoir, catch sars from crossbow barz
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    a story of a fiend

    arms and legs strapped, a dying fiend on tha scene
    pslams on the regs-rapped to the tune of fallen dreams
    it was all coke and c.r.e.a.m, picturesque portraits, gourmet cuisine
    there no way he could see, his routine caused delusion n mental gangrene
    the penalty was foreseen but could not be doged-baby at sixteen
    added to the smoke screen and a reminder of what his life could,ve been
    robbin clinics for keys of undiluted medical morphine
    shottin up the codeine, transferrin rotting themes in his genes
    checking out the marines, only to be turned down cause: lack of hygiene
    it sent him down a slope of depression searching cures n vaccines
    for his detramental disease- high off dope his only serene
    state of mind unclean, back in crack ally with the junkies
    back with wack hobbies, robbin old folks for there jewellery and G,s
    no ladies, shootin up with the slap of sea breeze
    praying to a god he thought had his soul siezed, gaping entries
    chasms and gullies - the terrain of his brain- conflicting armies
    one side barmy and the other calmly, no matter who won he got as high as marley
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    ^^any feedback for that last verse would be much appreciated...

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    link lost lines to their relevant rhymes
    like linking severed nerves to your spine, technique-turbine
    complete tweaked carbine, blows your last lifeline
    your confined to a quarter of you mind
    multiplied by the diameter of your "waistline"-------(WASTEline)
    the baseline hears your shit to no avail
    like a hailstorm in the pale desert vale
    your intrails get sliced,severed frail
    your blood gets drained in the chalice and grail
    my malice is "full-scale" more "kilos" then sperm whales
    you,ll learn who fails, gets implaled with verbal rails
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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    deceitful devils in any form on diffrent levels
    tearing the earth to pieces for diamonds oil and precious metals
    i boil a kettle watch the water bubble and boil
    one stage to another like flowers grown from sun water and soil
    i toil in my sleep i awake shake violenly and contemplate
    my fate in the millenium of hate petroleum leakege as they excavate
    newly dug reserves draining our core iam losin my nerves
    goin crazy endlessly spittin verbs smokin herbs
    walkin down the dark desolate curbs of the city of pity
    down and dirty so gritty unpretty the only surviors are the snakey and witty
    shacked an shitty so many milli-ions of megatons of opium crumbs
    injected in the skin by the unwise and dumb
    brain capacity the size of thumbelina and tom thumb
    iam stunned and shunned at this unsolvable uncontrolable sum
    read and attempted to solve with a shot of rum feelin numb
    at the thought of future generations
    illicit infactuactions mind control experimintations
    unholy situations trapped in a devils nation
    facin the music with a heated conversation to the primeminister or presdent
    battlin time sinister with courage an heaven scent
    fightin a fight in myself over wasted time spent
    friensships lent needing permisssion or concent
    to do what was meant to be done a long time ago
    i flow to and fro a rap my rap slow
    to show infinite possibliites summinin storms like aurora munroe
    superslidin in the snow cold and hard like william dafoe



    magical manipulations require complete concentration
    no hesitation just justification for mental invasion
    utter decleration of psychoological suffocation
    of the C.E.O or freemason its like havin only three raisens
    in the desert with an obnoxious cocasion no water no shelter no station
    no patience erase em with my freezing flowering flow
    one stage to another backside slam followed by a low blow
    my foes is crows and crows are foes you know
    i grow with everyday like i sow everyway
    in my life i failed now iam not playin gonna set sail
    defy the hail follow my destinys trail
    achieve undisputed vicory were i fail
    send a letter of my achievement to my mams in the mail
    like i found the holy grail
    too many brothas chasin their tails stoppin the habit then endin up in jail
    lift the veil covered over ya eyes look past the lies
    and try for the sake of all humanity lost in insanity
    dont hush the profanity of vanity calamity follows all in the concrete valley omalley
    hear one speach from the ghezawi rally take a truthseaking info breeding tally
    queenspark to cali sumaria to sally but sadly were madly votin for shit gladly
    like tony killed manny crazy like mixin the word hitler with tranny
    Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter
    The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water

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