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    Foreign country refugee, political prisoner set free
    Prodigal Son with vector physical quantity Velocity
    Lyrical savagery, spoken substances of toxic properties
    Oral cavity droppin’ nuclear weapons like Chemical Ali
    Glen Rice deadly marksman blastin’ black market organs
    Verbal Sultan, scaldin’ spit liquid of latent heat in molten
    Energy Oxen, blaze-breathin’ like King Ghidorah dragons
    God of Fire and Volcanoes like Vulcan
    Heat's mandatory when I spit like Hades in Roman
    Demon marches, Prince of Darkness Flamin’ arches
    Earth crust burnin’ in hell covered by inflamed locusts
    Holocaust gas chambers turnin’ Arthur to Ashe
    Faces of Death, Book of Revelations plagues
    Mongoloid melodies, Mothman prophecies
    Written warfare ravagin’ your Just War Theory
    Modern-day slavery, strippin’ you of civil liberties
    Calamity rap causin’ your equanimity tragedy
    HIV soldiers with type 2 diabetes in mutinies
    ABC’s Betty performin’ Ugly autopsies on Grey’s Anatomy
    Morbid obesity, guts stapled like gastric bypass surgeries
    Flesh eatin’ virus fleas the size of pythons in Burmese
    Bubonic disease attackin’ like a pack of Vietnamese
    Children of The Corn’s first born and deformed
    Skull Island cannibal warped, eatin’ your ruler’s corpse

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    the wordplay was definately dope but it was hard to rhyme wit some of it definately keep writing man

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    This here was fucking nuts kid! You crazy!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    You got some sick content...its like a synopsis of ideas...
    the verse dosn't really head in any particular direction...but it sparks some imagery in my head...
    Can you write suin that based on one particualar concept?

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