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    ^thanks homie i got this older one, its long hopefully not too long

    travel the planetary with expeditionary forces, disperse throughout the universe, to discover other life sources, returned with visions of life losses, caught in my whirlwind vortex, i call upon the army of anubis, lead by thee soldier of fortune, observe my light blindin like horus, to reveal the torement, under the world lives a man named osiris, who loves violence, who stroll in silence, except to suck the breath of any one left, and then i rest, meditate on a great mountain, where my thoughts flow like water through fountains, begin to get deeper, enter poseidon wiht his triton, zeus throwing strikes of lightning, what a sight yet im still frightned, aphrodite in a white nighty actin all snuggly, bitch i know you dont love me, so why you wanna try and fuck me, love cant exsist without peace, along came ares, tryin to act scary, master of war, for centuries never afraid to punch you in the jaw, then time stops from cronus, yea he owns this, never will he go homeless, shacked up with hestia, i shot down there messenger, they call me the dragon slayer, learned from the true god of war, yea thor, smash you with a huge hammer, spread like alexander, i can manage ya, blow up your major, centuries later he is cut by razors, i also forgot to mention , woden with words woven, to leave backs broken, still holden sword and shield, across this mental battlefield, on my shoulder rests a falcon, to prove swift n victorious, over endless opponents, mostly due to romans, all the people stopped hopin, as soon as cronus returns motion, again my minds floatin beyond dimensions, to seek higher inventions with intelligence, stiken with godly elegance, my mind drifts, my space ship, takes a trip into a time rift, and then they began to speak, sayin your mind is quite unique, not like the rest, who live in deciet, bless every person you meet, in the end you become the god, the great bronze feet

    transported resources, to further develop my culture, scirptures from ancient riddlers, to be decoded from pictures, hieroglyphic with rythmic orders, patterns to scatter and rearrange your matter, a martyr with no heart, from the dark remains my life force, build with the gods of the norse, ride in high upon a dark horse, followed by storms and hurricane winds, never will be forgotton, whether enemy or friends, in the end we are all the fallen, risen is the dead army of hades, from kings to babies, fiends to ladies, as my sword goes on the attack, the speed at which chemicals react, thors got my back, so returns ares with a thuderous clap, snap and crackle, leave your bones rattled and shattered, then i get shackled, locked in a cage, bust out with titans rage, spread flames across the eleisian fields to the river styxs, all three eyes fixed upon the mountain, atop where im screamin, " Big priest help me become released", then my mind is set free, traveled across the seas to thebes, where my soul first landed, and i was handed, the knowledge, translated then brandished, my shield and the sharpest edge, which i wield, with such skill, i only kill those that they cant feel, magical blade, obsedian steel made, for years it led me into the frey, choppin heads, sent to anubis, who owns the land of the dead, from him, recieved my warsuit as a gift, even arrows cant shoot through this, in the end i leave the planet in bliss, what can i say, i was the assassin for the gods and godesses of the elder days

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    It’s the microphone assassin
    Why do I have to stay blasting/
    Now that I’ve rechristened myself
    As a lyrical tyrant taking out emcees in my environment/
    I don’t need a beat to rip a track everything I did up until now
    Was in vein even it had been hard cuz I had got carded at the boarder/
    Now I started feeling slightly emo cuz of these wack pre-Madonna emcees
    Dressing up in Prada, Gucci and everything except what can cop round the way/
    Got all these kids looking up to them like their the best
    When my parents was my role model fuck a celebrity/
    We’re all human beings but idol worship isn’t my cuisine
    My verses be verses on the real like Ghost Face Killah appeal/
    I yield to now sword or man on the stand
    Debunking my life in exchange for his freedom/
    Now I got these suckers asking me what’s the wristband for?
    I reply blatantly it’s a reminder of the mental slavery we still under/
    Whether it be prescription drugs or some kind of institution
    Now you got all these cats confused as to what slavery really means/
    We rather cap it off with copping the green, chopping the green
    Smoking the green doing all this while living in a mean America/
    Asking me why doesn’t Dylan & Erica understand
    What Michelle Obama meant by that comment of a “Mean America”/
    These cats gotta look outside of the hysteria and the politics of the elite
    And see the people on the ground why don’t you do a quick meet and greet/
    So if you wanna be a lyricist
    You gotta come at the god wit some spiritual shit/
    Or if not I can split cha noggin in two
    And you can reprise your roll as seed in ya mothers womb/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bronze Feet View Post
    ^thanks homie i got this older one, its long hopefully not too long

    travel the planetary with expeditionary forces, disperse throughout the universe, to discover other life sources, returned with visions of life losses, caught in my whirlwind vortex, i call upon the army of anubis, lead by thee soldier of fortune, observe my light blindin like horus, to reveal the torement, under the world lives a man named osiris, who loves violence, who stroll in silence, except to suck the breath of any one left, and then i rest, meditate on a great mountain, where my thoughts flow like water through fountains, begin to get deeper, enter poseidon wiht his triton, zeus throwing strikes of lightning, what a sight yet im still frightned, aphrodite in a white nighty actin all snuggly, bitch i know you dont love me, so why you wanna try and fuck me, love cant exsist without peace, along came ares, tryin to act scary, master of war, for centuries never afraid to punch you in the jaw, then time stops from cronus, yea he owns this, never will he go homeless, shacked up with hestia, i shot down there messenger, they call me the dragon slayer, learned from the true god of war, yea thor, smash you with a huge hammer, spread like alexander, i can manage ya, blow up your major, centuries later he is cut by razors, i also forgot to mention , woden with words woven, to leave backs broken, still holden sword and shield, across this mental battlefield, on my shoulder rests a falcon, to prove swift n victorious, over endless opponents, mostly due to romans, all the people stopped hopin, as soon as cronus returns motion, again my minds floatin beyond dimensions, to seek higher inventions with intelligence, stiken with godly elegance, my mind drifts, my space ship, takes a trip into a time rift, and then they began to speak, sayin your mind is quite unique, not like the rest, who live in deciet, bless every person you meet, in the end you become the god, the great bronze feet

    transported resources, to further develop my culture, scirptures from ancient riddlers, to be decoded from pictures, hieroglyphic with rythmic orders, patterns to scatter and rearrange your matter, a martyr with no heart, from the dark remains my life force, build with the gods of the norse, ride in high upon a dark horse, followed by storms and hurricane winds, never will be forgotton, whether enemy or friends, in the end we are all the fallen, risen is the dead army of hades, from kings to babies, fiends to ladies, as my sword goes on the attack, the speed at which chemicals react, thors got my back, so returns ares with a thuderous clap, snap and crackle, leave your bones rattled and shattered, then i get shackled, locked in a cage, bust out with titans rage, spread flames across the eleisian fields to the river styxs, all three eyes fixed upon the mountain, atop where im screamin, " Big priest help me become released", then my mind is set free, traveled across the seas to thebes, where my soul first landed, and i was handed, the knowledge, translated then brandished, my shield and the sharpest edge, which i wield, with such skill, i only kill those that they cant feel, magical blade, obsedian steel made, for years it led me into the frey, choppin heads, sent to anubis, who owns the land of the dead, from him, recieved my warsuit as a gift, even arrows cant shoot through this, in the end i leave the planet in bliss, what can i say, i was the assassin for the gods and godesses of the elder days
    one critticism i got for you man is you gotta break ur backs up
    don't write e'm like paragraphs write e'm more like poem stanzas
    see how my verses have the back-slash i use that style so i know where my line breaks are man but other than that dopeness man

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    ^^ thanks homie, take all the advice i can get, breakin it down might help me spit it al ot better

    An, that verse was nice, i always enjoy readin your verses

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    Beyond the stars, and heaven's comes the celestrial hip-hop reverend
    Doves, and roses appear as i walk soldiers bow before my prescence
    Out of line stepping rivals get sent to the essence
    Tears shedding, once i use my weapon, swords for beheading
    settings disaster, coming attraction women call me master
    Just my vocal tone alone, makes then cum faster
    Mama raised a bastard, a hypocrite like your local church pastor
    Days passing faster, half these so called thugs are really actors
    Stab em with the truth, raising the roof with this 100 proof
    Wisdom from my tooth, building with the youth
    Alligned with the real, non-religious r.a.p. troops
    Groups re-coup their number, it's a long hot summer
    I bring the noise like thunder, strike like lightning
    Leave the wack extinct like vikings
    So into this hip-hop i get head while writing
    Exciting vandals for all to critique, and explore
    Black Thor, rhyme galore, shooting dice with the lord
    Give me my bank, i get high before i assemble the rank
    Moving through hoods in the armed and dangerous tank
    To my self i give thanks, as i shank those who try to taint
    The art of a saint, watch blood splatter like paint



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Psychotic dreams

    v1

    When i sleep it feels like i'm still awake, my whole body aches
    Sweat dripping down my flesh, regurgitate what i ate
    Not fast food, hog or steak, whip cream, and marble cake
    Looking in the mirror seeing scars on my face
    From what? On my kneck i see cuts
    And on my dressor two empty bottles of Belve, but i don't feel drunk
    I smell weed aroma, but there's no trees, or blunt
    It's hot as hell in this room, on the floor i see my ladies dress, and pumps
    Walking from room to room, but i'm alone, i hear footsteps in the front
    Of the house, they sound loud, but the noise drowned out
    I start to shout, and hear knocks on the door, who's coming quarter of four
    In the morning? I open it up to see my pet dog yawning
    Head to the kitchen on my refrigerator satanic drawings
    My cd players on playing rawkus soundbombing
    turned it off but it still plays, i'm scared, and amazed
    see one of my seeds and i calls his name
    And he acts like he can't see or hear me, put my hand on his face
    He cries, and runs away, this can't be real, i'm going crazy today
    I start to prey, and i hear a man laughing, then see him passing
    Chase him til i'm out breathe gasping, he's speaking pig latin
    Finally cornered the fool by the porch, ready to smash em
    My lady comes out in her night gown , asking me what happened?
    Looking at me like a madman when i explained the commotion
    she said you mustv'e had a nightmare, why is your finger broken??
    Last edited by Mantra; 07-22-2008 at 04:37 PM.



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Great shit J.T.S.... Keep writing, from what I've seen, you're just getting better.

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    It’s the doomilation verses the rhyming tyrant
    Making it blatantly honest like Former President Bill Clinton
    “I did not have sexual relations with that women”/
    I’m coming with the “Yoga Flame!”
    Like Dhalsim versus Blanka’s shocking mentality/
    Emcees better boost up they quality
    When I drop bombs you get no notoriety/
    Trying to reach out and grab some prosperity
    I think you should graduate like Kanye/
    To any dismay I rip you down like The Fall of Rome
    I’m off the dome like Supernatural when he freestyles/
    Y’all sucker emcees are pre-written get me a copy and let me have a listen
    Oops wait I thought you couldn’t keep ripping without ghostwriters/
    Looks like I got the sight beyond sight like sword of omens
    Y’all pups are nothing gnomes roaming the country side/
    Lend me your ears I spit spears y’all just pawns to my ears
    Watch this Bishop move in silence and remain equally violent/
    Confessionals are less impressionable
    When I’m addressing you from the pews/
    I got views from the skyscrapers jumping into action
    Call me “Lord of Chaos” when I’m unleashing undisputable odds/
    Fantastic actions classical magic beat mics down until they’re shedding plastic
    Openly average with the bars I unleash on you peons like Michael Savage/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shizzah View Post
    Great shit J.T.S.... Keep writing, from what I've seen, you're just getting better.
    P.E.A.C.E.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Progression peaks, expressions deep, infiltrators infiltrating streets
    I make Manny Ramerez hits, my shadow darkens society
    Xtra large the size of me, the government censors my bleeps
    Head snatching snatcher, rap raptures rapped rapidly
    Verses become sleet, i rap homicidal beneath the sheets
    Yellow tape in front of me, here comes the fans, coolin' sun degrees
    Leave some slums deceased, rest in peace, break-beats so sweet
    Awful unlawful underground king, Barbie, Ken killing Kennnedy
    amendments read, constutution catastraphe, institutions after me..
    I locked it down-town, fly-killing kiler, you maggots free
    Braids and Stevie Wonder beads, black Apollo Creed
    Mike tyson additude, Don king greed, dollar signs mislead our seeds
    Heater holders burning weed, cops ticket me for the flow speed
    Steez useless like bonus tracks, well-toned high tone raps
    Fingers snap, trash bags full of scraps, garbage gangsters attacked
    The mack returns, cattle burns, i branded the worms
    Enter states through interstates, my formula u-turns
    Sit back and learn, stack all money earned
    Half-a mil to burn, i learned my biz from the firm
    Travel overseas, props return, chopping turns
    trees falling on ballers balling, cop callers calling
    Emergency, urgency, birds beat color burgundy
    I made seas, seasons change like the kicks on my feet
    next contestant, remove their intestines in seconds, son's the second me
    eat emcee's til my belly's full, i'm the coal global heat
    Last edited by Mantra; 07-29-2008 at 01:13 PM.



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    Quote Originally Posted by J.T.S. View Post
    Progression peaks, expressions deep, infiltrators infiltrating streets
    I make Manny Ramerez hits, my shadow darkens society
    Xtra large the size of me, the government censors my bleeps
    Head snatching snatcher, rap raptures rapped rapidly
    Verses become sleet, i rap homicidal beneath the sheets
    Yellow tape in front of me, here comes the fans, coolin' sun degrees
    Leave some slums deceased, rest in peace, break-beats so sweet
    Awful unlawful underground king, Barbie, Ken killing Kennnedy
    amendments read, constutution catastraphe, institutions after me..
    I locked it down-town, fly-killing kiler, you maggots free
    Braids and Stevie Wonder beads, black Apollo Creed
    Mike tyson additude, Don king greed, dollar signs mislead our seeds
    Heater holders burning weed, cops ticket me for the flow speed
    Steez useless like bonus tracks, well-toned high tone raps
    Fingers snap, trash bags full of scraps, garbage gangsters attacked
    The mack returns, cattle burns, i branded the worms
    Enter states through interstates, my formula u-turns
    Sit back and learn, stack all money earned
    Half-a mil to burn, i learned my biz from the firm
    Travel overseas, props return, chopping turns
    trees falling on ballers balling, cop callers calling
    Emergency, urgency, birds beat color burgundy
    I made seas, seasons change like the kicks on my feet
    next contestant, remove their intestines in seconds, son's the second me
    eat emcee's til my belly's full, i'm the coal global heat
    JTS damn impressive is the word to phrase this verse you sold me on the manny line i was like damn son you just getting better w/ time

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    I was revealed to the truths, through ancient wisdom,
    seen images of golden kingdoms, palaces with great kings,
    crown of jewels across my dome, fine women sing, and wine flows,
    my minds in a liquid state, fate has given me this place,
    rule it with no face, mask that covers the war scars,
    battle wounds, but still leave women swooned,
    fuck em then they gone, spread my seed like genghis khan,
    my legacy lives for eons, be gone, out of my chamber,
    i feel as if my lifes in danger, then enters a stranger,
    had visions of a deranged mangler, all of a sudden, an attempt to bludgeon,
    moved to fast, drew my sword and slashed, head cut in half,
    the spot he stands pools red, there he remains dead,
    then an arrow pierced right through my head,
    everybodies face shows shock, rose and walked,
    then stopped, dropped to my knees, i can still breath,
    im still livin, im just way to persistant,
    in an instant the arrow was retrieved, immortal is what i must be

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    Its dome shaker flow breaker rhyme snatcher ESP reader
    Whenever I rap I’m telepathic like Professor X/
    Emcees should research before they dare and test
    The best even when they rested coming off the bench/
    I press these half stepping niggaz back show e’m how to do it B-I-G like Shaq
    I attack racks when I’m slamming cats banging out hoes in whips like the pros/
    Flowing doper than most without giving the industry the cold shoulder
    I told cha I’m the flame you roast pigs with and spit over instrumentals with/
    God gave me a gift to rip through fakes
    Mow the lawn show I can see these garden snakes/
    Break fools like breakfast I eat quick, cook sick low on the carbs bitch
    I’m diabetic interconnected spit wicked like got a sweet tooth for candy bars/
    Y’all rip scandalous bars and write nothing that scared scripting nothing major
    After I heard Bis, Tame, Red, Meth, Ghost, Rae, KRS there’s nothing you could do to spit with/
    Y’all ain’t got no maximum strength to move a bolder with
    So you could spit that hot trash to kids that don’t know no better/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bronze Feet View Post
    I was revealed to the truths, through ancient wisdom,
    seen images of golden kingdoms, palaces with great kings,
    crown of jewels across my dome, fine women sing, and wine flows,
    my minds in a liquid state, fate has given me this place,
    rule it with no face, mask that covers the war scars,
    battle wounds, but still leave women swooned,
    fuck em then they gone, spread my seed like genghis khan,
    my legacy lives for eons, be gone, out of my chamber,
    i feel as if my lifes in danger, then enters a stranger,
    had visions of a deranged mangler, all of a sudden, an attempt to bludgeon,
    moved to fast, drew my sword and slashed, head cut in half,
    the spot he stands pools red, there he remains dead,
    then an arrow pierced right through my head,
    everybodies face shows shock, rose and walked,
    then stopped, dropped to my knees, i can still breath,
    im still livin, im just way to persistant,
    in an instant the arrow was retrieved, immortal is what i must be
    My consistency is constant, living disease, Magic johnson
    Middleman hustle, middle-weight kid Compton
    Brains blown to noodle slush, Philly beans in Boston
    Stay with the green like celtics, juggular slicing contest
    before the arm-rest, remove the fire-arms, and vest
    Civilizing civilization, my nature a fire burning treach
    Step off, swinging the club, ace face stitch conquest
    like Das in efx, i fart funk-masters flex
    you chickens couldn't touch a breast without getting pecked
    Pass the laytex i'm hitting next, his wifey fucked on the steps



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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