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    Thanks for the love guys!!



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    Yo, I dont know if this is the right thread, but ive been writing for a few months, im trying to get some criticism or feedback on how I can improve, heres a few of my verses.

    my raps can split an atom, i spit science of rockets
    burn corneas i scorch eyeballs out of the sockets
    dont knock it, i can magnetize money out your pockets\
    inspiration, hit a wall jumpover dont writers block it
    dont question my methods, i spit lessons
    have you chopped like some meat in a delicatessen
    felon obesseive, what comes out my mouth is agressive
    vocal vibrations creating conjugating a hidden message
    see the truth for what it is illuminati
    pump shotty for interlopers who tryn to stop me



    apply the skin to the skeleton the scipture to the scroll
    paint a picture with the melon and, the knowledge yo behold
    into the mold i pour the liquid wax for the creation
    causein fresh impressions, and unfamilar sensations
    mutation of the natural toungue has been enhanced
    but acknowleging the culture like natives fire and dance
    transplant wisdom of the old into the youth of today
    a formula for innovation, dettering dismay
    whatever articulated rises up and implodes
    sending shrapnel every which way wisdom bestowed
    i hold the key that opens the vault of creativity
    music drops it unlocks spillin words hit the beat
    way of attacking emcees is similar to military
    divide and conquer but its stealthy to the contrary
    from here he ties the loose ends and adds finishing touches
    x marks the spot so now i got em in my clutches


    do rappers a favour my flavour is immpecable
    im intellectual when you spit its inacceptable
    my tech is full of full metal jackets im packin ratchets
    infact im john mackinroe hit you with a tennis racket
    my team aline in formation speak divin information
    line for line its amazin combine divine innovation
    writin rhymes in the basement strategic placement
    your facing embrace the content i live with no laments
    ima marksmen my bars are like 50 cal razors
    with a red dot lazer attached able to hit from far back
    ive attacked wack fools on the tarmac in preschool
    so listen up because im here to teach rules
    one, dont mess with the 7 letter smooth
    ill remove your head from your shoulders if i disaprove
    two, dont speak to me once ive begun
    i spit words sicker then h 1 n 1

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    my raps can split an atom, i spit science of rockets
    burn corneas i scorch eyeballs out of the sockets
    dont knock it, i can magnetize money out your pockets
    Dope



    apply the skin to the skeleton the scipture to the scroll
    paint a picture with the melon and, the knowledge yo behold
    into the mold i pour the liquid wax for the creation
    causein fresh impressions, and unfamilar sensations
    nice wordplay
    way of attacking emcees is similar to military
    divide and conquer but its stealthy to the contrary
    from here he ties the loose ends and adds finishing touches
    x marks the spot so now i got em in my clutches
    also nice



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
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    thanks for the feedback

    exploitation of mistakes we got choices
    my sentiment inaudable i write to voice it
    mind over matter, words can shatter a persuasion
    will power decisions is the correct equasion
    you could become a private stand and suffer inline
    take orders from everybody not utilisin your mind
    approach the situation when you in position of demand
    choake the weakness that inhabits you and start makin commands
    when the hands of all humans crush the shallow
    i will emerge from the sand with deathly hallows
    shoot burning arrows at all of the opposition
    your eyes is mad narrow so open your mental vision
    accept my manner, every man for himself
    you slept, i aint changed, its the cards i was dealt
    each and every person has weakness and strengths
    so embrace the good and tolerate to a length


    thoughts on bicycles while im rollin down streets
    my brain spins like the chain interlocking the teeth
    mocking this beat, zoom into it like binicoluars see
    unpopular he let his mind drift, the lockers empty
    the concrete seen many things, people rise and fall
    a good kid growing up comprimising it all
    falling off, teachers askin where he been cant recall
    now hes rollin in stalls scralliin words on the wall
    the sky darkens, birds will vanish and hide, they can sense it
    the atmosphere is getting darker and cold, growing tension
    dissension sun and cloud fighting for attention
    bad surroundings can inffluence bad result suspension
    precipitation foggin windows is holdin him back
    gotta get out, lockeddown,hes shackled and trapped
    when the sky clears he disappears, persevere,
    shed a tear move on, the concsience is clear


    ^dont have much experience writing with that style, what yall think

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    Never tolerated the overrated this spots mine dictated
    Many fables faded due to what he created the date stated
    On the finished production the beats seduction to the eardrum
    Pressed, and packaged to arrive on shelves by tomorrow at one
    will it sell or flop? Will it collect dust, or will he have to restock?
    Only time will tell the release date as avid fans flock
    To purchase the LP we saw lines for blocks
    Boosters, mad cops even copped it the day it dropped
    people are pleased singing the hooks, and lyrics driving high speed
    verses memorized by seeds who just learned how to speak
    The songs even made enemies congregate in harmony
    Congratulations on the plaque some proceeds i gave back
    Signed hundreds of copies of the LP, papers, backs, and hats
    Touring reassuring the critics he gives energy the game lacks
    From N.Y. to L.A.X. he commands stages with tremendous effects
    The workload seems heavy but he feels too blessed to rest
    Assured respect to his devotion instead of coastal boasting
    he continues grinding and half the worlds vibing
    See's the opportunity as a pool then dives in
    unaware of a situation he exits the palladium silent
    Then out of nowhere things get violent
    Gunshots people drop and some emcee's are still rhyming



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    throw your axes i rack your facts get cha heads severed like live server, when i am surfing the web you best cut cha connection so you'll be deemed detected/
    injected a weapon infection are you comprehending what i am saying....?
    get cha team, they're all snakes bretryal waits in bushes and leave while u lay/
    get cha grave symbolistically i kill rappers in a cataclysim wisdom derby
    verbally worried you'll get deaded by my thought process speeds at overclocked reads/
    obvious opposite drop in sets wave your flags get cha dragged to hell
    excel dwellin the maze sell your soul so your a caft that just grazes/
    it's the chaotic sheep sleep on me i geez your leads get cha wires crossed
    electrfy the audience when i throwdown break you bulls back down to cows/
    you can't prowl round my sound it's too murky like a rainy day with fog on the way
    so if you wanna stay safe you best not come toward chaos
    or odds being hell will you be breathing/

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    Quote Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS View Post
    throw your axes i rack your facts get cha heads severed like live server, when i am surfing the web you best cut cha connection so you'll be deemed detected/
    injected a weapon infection are you comprehending what i am saying....?
    get cha team, they're all snakes bretryal waits in bushes and leave while u lay/
    get cha grave symbolistically i kill rappers in a cataclysim wisdom derby
    verbally worried you'll get deaded by my thought process speeds at overclocked reads/
    obvious opposite drop in sets wave your flags get cha dragged to hell
    excel dwellin the maze sell your soul so your a caft that just grazes/
    it's the chaotic sheep sleep on me i geez your leads get cha wires crossed
    electrfy the audience when i throwdown break you bulls back down to cows/
    you can't prowl round my sound it's too murky like a rainy day with fog on the way
    so if you wanna stay safe you best not come toward chaos
    or odds being hell will you be breathing/


    the bastard of swords aligned with the lord
    Attack like starving alligators my prey lay dead by the door
    break all your locks hardheaded with a headache
    score settled you meddle forced you to freebase
    Speaker blaring heaven's sake i execute the featherweight
    Guns, and duct tape for traitors and snakes
    after my cakes that i baked at half past eight
    new breeds just wait until your disco flow skates
    Back in effect butcher chop sicko's that practice incest
    Hands in chess boards to master the next war
    Solo rocking polo draped in muslim garments
    Custom searched and after they begged for a pardon
    Jums gave me street stardom the jail gave me blues
    The system is designed to stagnate your moves
    C.o.'s suffocating fools in life there's two sides to choose
    Bundling up for these winter wars shootouts in front of schools
    Blood pools babies lay in them the mothers are broken women
    after every ending is a beginning my hair thinning from sinning
    nothing but crying from kids dying from slugs flying
    For years held back tears for fears no softies here
    More murders as more years pass devil whispered in my ear
    Temptation was broke the make belive solutions a hoax
    Instead of going to church brothers are going to toke
    Once their high their ready to roll on the block and post
    Killing over notes no jokes just running from gun smoke
    Hearts broke as folk question their mentality
    Feeling bitter about issues of reality
    Talented is wasted young girls dressed half naked
    Virgins get smashed relatives cherry breaking
    Wino's shaking the last drink before he collapsed on the sink
    Choked on his own vomit they found him due to the stink



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Don't dare the tested, tried and proved, parented guidance suggested
    didn't cha read the warning NOPE guess that's why you getting slaughtered/
    with every verse I author
    it's another lesson in verbal torture/
    don't dare the best even weaponry be presented in the any version you just uploaded
    get cha team deciphered and decoded when I am reloaded/
    dead the stress, your just another flee I flicked off
    you cannot bicker, battle against the sicker picker upper/
    if you wanna get ripped to shreds like a paper towel
    I suggest you take a bowl and get tossed in the toilet/
    I AM RATED R, never thinking openly vicious spit acid at cha bitches
    get cha shit switched swatched watch out my havoc be malicious/
    speak twisted I get cha dart dipped in pools my blood be cold as ice
    they're ain't no emotion there when you stare just see black holes in me/

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    Drops burn like bleach to eyes my speeches rise
    Me and hip-hop go together like
    Italians and pizza pies
    On beats I'm fly with my soul i socialize
    Touch the sky as these scavengers die
    Due to starvation
    I stir up creations enemy of the masons
    Degrees hotter than the basement
    Every hit blood tasting
    Your spots vacant
    So spaced out i day dream of cosmos
    Out of space conquest while eyes closed
    I show them how to make mountains out of mo' hills like the volcanoes
    Y'all exchange flows time to boss up
    Got your jaw broken from the gossip
    Drop this constipated hot shit
    Spit in your hot grits grind your chick tonight
    Back broke soon as she hit the lights
    Heavy breathing blew out the candlelight's
    Give them a lesson on how to handle dikes
    While you were locked i gave her all the mail except your kites



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    Hell razah

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    rhyme like you got a hatchet to pick wit the Sheep didn't cha peep the sign on the entrance
    “watch how you come at me” guess it's a hack-n-shaq job for me, hand me my machete/
    i slit cha wrist like i'm leaving a death note in this bitch/
    out cha in the cold froze flows time capsule rapture after math
    draft you back in fire watch me destroy booths like Godzilla was here/
    joke's on you thinking i'm the Penguin when your just frozen from the deadly combo I lay on ya head
    give you more aches in pains check the way I amaze cha team by how much I fucked cha brain up/
    duck from the low crush the dame you wit, crash through heads like a car HD didn't cha see me coming
    I guess you'll have to die hard like John McClain/
    check the game I blame the name know the chiefs I roll wit
    we exiting any scene with hell from 9 different guillotines/
    drop more terror than Napoleon and his regime
    it's all a dream sequenced up to the drag toward hell your knee deep in/
    this ain't Kansas, you better abandon ship quicker than a you dig in ya chicks clit
    my flow is the flip of a light switch i'm burning down this bitch quick better say your goodbyes/

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    Quote Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS View Post
    rhyme like you got a hatchet to pick wit the Sheep didn't cha peep the sign on the entrance
    “watch how you come at me” guess it's a hack-n-shaq job for me, hand me my machete/
    i slit cha wrist like i'm leaving a death note in this bitch/
    out cha in the cold froze flows time capsule rapture after math
    draft you back in fire watch me destroy booths like Godzilla was here/
    joke's on you thinking i'm the Penguin when your just frozen from the deadly combo I lay on ya head
    give you more aches in pains check the way I amaze cha team by how much I fucked cha brain up/
    duck from the low crush the dame you wit, crash through heads like a car HD didn't cha see me coming
    I guess you'll have to die hard like John McClain/
    check the game I blame the name know the chiefs I roll wit
    we exiting any scene with hell from 9 different guillotines/
    drop more terror than Napoleon and his regime
    it's all a dream sequenced up to the drag toward hell your knee deep in/
    this ain't Kansas, you better abandon ship quicker than a you dig in ya chicks clit
    my flow is the flip of a light switch i'm burning down this bitch quick better say your goodbyes/
    how did the fuck you sleep
    on the sheep my technique is sick
    like obtuse triangle just call me oblique
    the way I stretch it out like pussy that ain't been fucked yet
    when you thought I just lost nope I got confidence
    saying I got no swag is hate I just bagged and unleashed like a fireball
    get cha jag back i'll blow it up after I wrap it up
    wet cha like water call me condensation
    increase flows watch me run a river through it
    i'm colder than the arctic you just can't harbor it
    i'm the van gogh wit the flow just painting shit without hearing a beat
    I rape the track just as we meet I raid cha panties just call me Red n Mef Man
    deadly def with jams in my head leaving victims stone cold when i'm colder than frozen food
    hope you knew how sick I am when i'm sicker than any tequilla you sipping on
    iller than verbals don't need cha audition
    spit wisdom kill you crazy off the hinges, watch the way the doors swinging
    verbally never just sick wit I through SARS at cha
    watch cha body i'm the swine coming wit the flu included
    didn't cha reuse them needles, i'm a diabetic eat cha up like a sugar rush
    bust a more heat rocks when I dust you off like some old reeboks
    you can't call it a street hop when your fleas getting stomped
    don't roach up i'm potent as sprayed being sprayed out of a can of raid
    check the karate i'm brazilian with my jujistu spliting you in TWO
    by the FLOW that's FOUR rolled in sushi yo
    don't get a clue, take a hint i'm a pinch of the sicker rippers mixed with the illest emcee
    deadly invade cha inner space i'm martin short cut cha at the umbilical
    splice you out cha childrens life didn't cha see click stop fast fowarding through it

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    Split his noggin while he's jogging the bats robbing
    sleep on this verse insert the burst throbbing
    Opium for the numbness back slaps for the dumbness
    Violators wanna spit ? Hang them by lips
    spraying thick right hand too sore to grip
    The Gatling state your name get your frame lit
    Bus bombers full of informers slayed with llamas
    Slap your favorite emcee the whole game against me
    Your senses lost so you can't enforce he backed down gently
    Wordplay worth a key so were in Miami with heat
    Deep like cops in the street trees hidden while I'm ripping
    Pedaling stress dealing with life symptoms
    Topic switcher murder mystereries done like Jack the ripper
    Murder written in Hebrew tablets translated to you
    React rude and the ending is crude
    Crucial to leave you loop holed after the feud
    Exhibit D shared with a chosen few
    we can relate but if you emulate your grafted by the gate
    That's golden were rolling bones leaving spinsters with swollen domes
    More hustling to put down mortgage for homes
    Illegal life behind my past tense fix the game with my rap wrench
    It's uncommon that these cats make sense sterile strength
    Justice league event and I'm the enemy of the prince
    For killing the king the death stroke cometh with one swing
    These playground rappers aren't built to last in the ring
    Chaos passed the machine were two deep backed by nine
    Queens kissed our rings and the shines expanded their minds
    From the hurt of being overworked hidden cultures rooted from dirt
    It's earth pure at war another hollowed score
    In the house boning haunted whores
    Ninja without a mask that unleashed 10 percent of his wrath
    Hands slashed still dashed fast as twista words
    My enemies burned while they prey to Satan in expensive furs



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Throw on darts give you vats of urine
    when I'm spiting purely vicious ewwwwwww/
    look at cha shit they trying to write phewwwwwwww
    it's not even give him credit for trying to pass effort/
    I settle the debt with a hustle that most government officials don't got
    how the fuck we a trillion dollars in debt wit the Chinese and they heads fleeing at a sperm rate/
    edutain the thoughts I how I should flow
    get cha glow deaded by the way I lay down a royal flush did you see my full court press coming?/
    check the way I force you rappers to abort projects
    you can't even start when thoughts are to google what's a Techwon/
    I'm the best on, check the targets i'm dead on like a rail gun
    rifling hyphen get cha hype in you can't include it in your package/
    once you fail these labels ain't playing ball they ain't bailing you out
    they wondering if they chips are recoup-able/
    now you want styles to fathom when i'm hotter than “Eyes wide Shut”
    you can't put out a cigarette butt when you thinking about cha smut collection/
    I put cha brain in a figure four, unlock the door your lines are poorer than the City Budget with
    no Sewage plant to ship the waste out so we can filtrate you/

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    We illuminate swoon on jakes in the time of one take
    Hassle my squad and a hot iron steaming your face
    used to move weight intestine lifted
    Shitty mood my bladder shifted
    Gully gifted no witness can describe the description
    Of the left inscription that dictated all decisions
    decisive to drama armor for missions
    Expert chess player you pawns lack wisdom
    Deadly environment i dissipated where the fire went
    studied the books while they were chatting i was never giving in
    Call me kin the blood type better match
    open your back with the hatch the fugitive you'll never catch
    Rednecks fade to black they encore for the cracks
    Drool for the tracks raps outsmart your tricks
    j.T.s. back in this bitch desert storming' emcee's tactics



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Quote Originally Posted by J.T.S. View Post
    We illuminate swoon on jakes in the time of one take
    Hassle my squad and a hot iron steaming your face
    used to move weight intestine lifted
    Shitty mood my bladder shifted
    Gully gifted no witness can describe the description
    Of the left inscription that dictated all decisions
    decisive to drama armor for missions
    Expert chess player you pawns lack wisdom
    Deadly environment i dissipated where the fire went
    studied the books while they were chatting i was never giving in
    Call me kin the blood type better match
    open your back with the hatch the fugitive you'll never catch
    Rednecks fade to black they encore for the cracks
    Drool for the tracks raps outsmart your tricks
    j.T.s. back in this bitch desert storming' emcee's tactics
    it's a battlefield out here get cha self blown up
    by the time the flow starts you already denigrated/
    you ain't ballin in my lane i'm the bruiser, the bully
    watch me throw them D's watch cha kneel to ya knees like you b4 ZOD/
    negro please you ain't death certified my flow is always been prescribed
    check the warning on the back of the label "take wit caution"/
    if you wanna put this game on “pause” you better have a good reason
    you ain't got nathen not even a bio break is reasonable/
    watch me peak then out weigh the whole of the sum
    when I divide emcees by PIE I rip that shit apart
    like eyes wide open check the flow it ain't sewn/
    I can go wreck shop, detach myself from everything around me
    you get tracked like phones that found with minutes on it/
    stay potent you ain't gon like when we strike iron out heads with a metal striker
    aim high I stay low leave you done like the blue man group, check for proof/
    raise the roof you shit be a smoke stack by how much emcees I burn
    destroy you like a forest fire, if you wanna be smokey the bear, I ain't gon run/
    i'm a just taxidermy ya ass and lay the smack down
    watch you be apart of my next carpet pattern/
    can you rap or not is the question that should be posed in interviews
    I can master splitter you and leave you split in two halve/
    which do you want more your left or right
    my lines never be drawn just grinded down til they sharp as a sword/
    so if you wanted to test the best even now...best get down and put cha brows down
    you ain't trying to get broke like a number two pencil when I ink the pen well/
    don't try and state cha great when you ain't even in my paint let alone my rank
    I am the best even now, computers rank numero uno, blame the BCS and ESPN/
    Last edited by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS; 11-14-2009 at 06:32 PM.

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