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    okay heres my second try at writin a verse. this one the flow is really tricky and you probably wont get it unless u hear me rap it. but here it is anyways.

    What is an emcee? Anybody, quickly
    I'm searchin' for the definition but it still eludes me
    Can someone spell it out for me in Layman's terms
    Cuz I need an answer like a broke physician needs germs
    I see brothers out there spittin' bout they gats and they macks
    But the facts, they all wack, rhymin' only for a stack
    Step up..my lines attack, like a malnourished pack
    At the crack of the bat I set it off like a jack
    Weak verse, three letter words, make you lose a game of scrabble
    ..Rappers puttin' wrong emphasis on the wrong syllable
    Break it down, they lyrics read like a book by Dr. Seuss
    Never stop bangin' out hits, got more rhymes than Mother Goose
    I be choppin' down competitors like vines in a jungle
    Time to rumble, pathetic artists soon will crumble
    Under my might, lyrical barbaric on the mic
    20/20/20 sight, bark is half as bad as bite
    This verse is a curse I be layin' on you posers
    Put down your pen, when you see me comin' closer
    Gimmick rappers couldn't hang with me without a stencil
    My flow is natural, just give me a pad and pencil
    And I can wreck it, without a moments hesitation
    No calibration, get off without fornication
    Let the celebration, commence and bring the children
    No question I'm the best in the game, compare to Zildjian
    My lips are like my nine and my tongue is like the trigger
    Words are my bullets bouncin' off eardrums like Tigger
    I got heart like Jimmy V, and the will of Carlton Fisk
    "Emcees" proceed with caution, battle at your own risk



    like i said the flow is kinda confusin..if you got any questions about the lyrics feel free to ask and ill explain.
    through songs i write, my wrongs i right
    if you wanna fight the power, get the power to fight


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    bump, i hate when people bump their own shit, but i gotta get some feedback, its the only way to improve.
    through songs i write, my wrongs i right
    if you wanna fight the power, get the power to fight


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