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    Default Dusk Vs. whoever....

    16 a piece, ....get at me.
    Last edited by oDoUoSoKo; 08-20-2007 at 01:30 PM.

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    yo what up son, hope you learn how to walk soon
    it's gonna take the best of you to battle my platoon
    i'm bound to die with silver spoons
    walking with a fork like zeus
    with the force of a hundred typhoons
    speaking the truth like god and heres the proof
    i conduce minds like satan penetrating
    vacant minds spectating
    levitating conciousness to alternated states of existence
    persistence rivals my shiftiness
    as a terrible witness i spit this
    plentifull nutrition
    aimed at ya vision
    unreliable superstition chases you down like satelite dishes
    conforming mentalities
    it's a fraction of combined fatalities
    fragments of assassins die the fastest
    from spasmatic acrobatics climbing the fastest
    spraying ya blood on the canvas
    whose art comes the fastest
    only god has the answer to this
    but the secret shall be revealed
    through whispers that are consealed
    in the ocular distances to divine presence
    there is no match for his persistance
    cleanliness and emptiness leads to his holy rememberance
    understanding my dimension
    is similar to christs' assention into heaven

    game over

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    damn secretwon your the dopest how did you come up with that?

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    i don't know how i do it, i just do it.

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    ok, ill gt at u tomoro even tho u di d more thn 16, im on my wii so i cant now....juan.

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    i sense fear in your heart disguised by over confidence
    due to the fact your new to the Rap, unknown anonymous
    but fuck bones, im piercing skin hittin ya vital organs
    like bible orphans in churches singin bout how nice the lord is
    ya life is horse shit, bitch ill strike you quick
    light the wick, bring ya crew and ima fight ya dogs like Michael Vick
    i hold the title, its attached to abdomen, the fact is im cancerous
    in the sense that i attack til your pants are pissed
    u think u stand to piss? bitch ill ram a stick in ya stomach
    then after kick, and have you thinkin masochistic in public
    and if u love the pain, ill put a crown of blades above your brain
    flood ya vains, shoot you from the strain til zues becoms ya name
    excuse me if i gave the illusion this was a game
    if it is fucker, get put in a trunk like Chris Tucker
    bitch what up?, wanna give me your life? the cost is valid
    i thought ya name was ckrewton, your probly like tossin salads...

    even tho u wrote more than supposed to...lets get some votes.
    Last edited by oDoUoSoKo; 08-20-2007 at 01:36 PM.

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    if it's two rounds then don't we need the 2nd round?
    if not, i'll drop a vote by tonight.
    Classic - "Disciple of Ares"

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    im sorry i didnt mean two rounds..lemme edit it out.

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    Everything - Dusk.
    seriously, wanna know why?

    "yo what up son, hope you learn how to walk soon
    it's gonna take the best of you to battle my platoon"

    that was the ONLY punchline in ckrew's verse.
    and it sucked.
    the rest was just bragging & filler, and it wasn't even structured good.
    you really need work dude, not to be offensive.
    this was a damn mudhole stomping.

    Vote - Dusk.

    it's seriously clear why.
    ckrew, you need some serious work.
    Classic - "Disciple of Ares"

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    i just didnt want to leave it untouched...seem like a pussy, so i left him a lil somethin...good looks classic.

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    yall niggas hatin. i'm not a punch line punk anyway.
    lets get some real votes. i vote me cuz this niggas rhymes got no substance. style is just plain and simple.

    this niggs dickriding vote doesn't count unless he wanna battle

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    i'm not hatin though yall just don't understand this shit. shorties.

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    i got niggas changing they minds after one verse
    wack niggas cant quench my thirst
    don't count me out until i lay down my 2nd verse
    you scared to go first
    but fuk it i took the sacrifice
    like a roll of the dice and defeated you twice
    heres the curse 4 horse men rushing in
    pumped up with adrenaline
    on a steady diet of vitamin mescaline
    open up ya minds eye so that u
    can c kings and pharoahs slowly
    sever ya arterys, veins and capilaries
    ya life force is outa ballance son
    niggas like you are scared of violence son
    holla at me and i'll drop some science son
    don't hate me cuz you lost this one
    thank me cuz i'm the ckretwon
    bringing you to the light so that you can see the son

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    ckingrealeternaltruthwithoutnegativity
    figure it out bitches

    now like i said. game over.

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