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    just for future reference, I don't live this life, just bored

    running up in a liquor store with a napsack
    hoping to bag a couple of dollars
    until a cop was in there with a butterfinger
    but to me it wasn't a thing
    saw that gat, but thought fuck that
    picked the knife up, preceded to gush in his back
    not wanting my first, second, or third strike
    I jetted after getting at the clerk on the phoneline
    cops questioning, came up wit a couple of quick tone lies
    dumbass hadn't a clue, the essence inside
    telling me the presence of mind not to tell shit
    but later that night, got a knock on the door, with a faggot acting passionate
    like I just won the lotto, weary a tadbit
    but nothing much, but holding no ammunition
    like an amputation, police raiding
    freeze, get on ya knees, its about it
    tried to resist, but gun downed in front of the bullet



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    Default Re: "murder"

    Quote Originally Posted by u-turn
    running up in a liquor store with a napsack
    hoping to bag a couple of dollars
    until a cop was in there with a butterfinger
    but to me it wasn't a thing
    saw that gat, but thought fuck that
    doesn't rhyme once... i for one, can't force myself through a verse that doesn't rhyme... i started this in hopes that you might be improvin', but i stand by my earlier advice: stop postin' for a few months and practice very hard...

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