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    I'm just trying to improve my lyrics though, cause I never tried writing before I signed up here, so if you want an easy win, go ahead

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    just put your name down, I'll spit 1st

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    do it up
    live and learn, dont be a bitch


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    forgot about this, hold on

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    no rush
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    shit dude. I'll post tomorrow. I meant to copy but hit paste and lost my verse, and I'm mad tired. I'll just edit it in this post, so the first page isn't just us talking.

    peace

    edit - my verse

    skills you need to attain and keep and you got amnesia
    got a plan A and B that'll portray Treazon as a true squealer
    gave you a call and want my quarterback like Terrell Owens
    naturally dead, hear the echo's from the beach shells glowing
    since Treazon was born he wanted it all, his face on bills and dirt
    trying with the punches, says he got an ace with sleeveless shirt
    see you a little too feeble to come away contesting the decision
    a wannabe winner, better yet sore loser messing with precision
    guessing in a game when you need a couple of hard facts
    you can't win with the mental, I come from the heart in my drops
    murder is the case, find you in the obituary clippings in my notepad
    with your crew, you claimed to be bad like your hoe's mad
    when I came with the heat you played dumb, stopped dropped and rolled
    down a killers road, now you in the scrolls, you had to fold
    got full grown skeletons in the closet like you and a fag kissed
    you ain't get no rapping paper like you on this Santa's bad list

    I sorta lost motivation after I lost my first verse, oh well. your up
    Last edited by thatKid; 09-20-2007 at 12:16 PM.

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    pages of fine rhymes aged like fine wine with wickedness fermented
    its not demons but mental disabilities that makes this kid demented
    you givin out an easy victory? i aint here for that
    cuz yo, a half-decent rapper, i mistook you for that
    honestly when i replied, i wanted some decent competition
    now im not sure if im battling a baby, or a child with autism
    your lines are wack, written wit absolutely no riddim
    this battle wasn't even from the start, like Capitalism
    you say you lost your motivation cuz you cant copy and paste?
    or is it cuz Treazon leaves phony emcees to rot in disgrace
    lyrical master of martial arts swingin' rope darts to ya face
    ya blood splattering the wall is my art-form like spray-paint
    i sacrifice you to the heavens, modern Mayan ritual version
    God's soul and mine merging, happy cuz he asked for a virgin
    Treazon is the best alive example of how evil the world is turning
    this verse is like real medieval times, cuz the demented is burning
    live and learn, dont be a bitch


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    votes!
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    uppin for votes biiiiiiiiitches
    live and learn, dont be a bitch


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    This was basic battle you know.....REALY NOTHING PULL ME IN....
    IM GONIG WITH demented AND SHIT.....Treazon VERSE WAS OK.....

    VOTE DEMENTED

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    Quote Originally Posted by Treazon View Post
    uppin for votes biiiiiiiiitches
    GET FUCK OUT OF HERE

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mattlocka View Post
    GET FUCK OUT OF HERE

    put down the crack pipe bud.
    live and learn, dont be a bitch


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    Quote Originally Posted by Treazon View Post
    put down the crack pipe bud.
    You a dick.....man...!

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    i was obviously fucking around from teh start, like id actually call voters bitches?

    and i wasnt the one who voted against somebody for spite.. unless you actually think demented won that...


    haha peace
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    Quote Originally Posted by Treazon View Post
    i was obviously fucking around from teh start, like id actually call voters bitches?

    and i wasnt the one who voted against somebody for spite.. unless you actually think demented won that...


    haha peace
    I said"Treazon verse was ok"Now for spite no,call pes bitches is to light.
    And why your worried about the win you not battle to I say so.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mattlocka View Post
    I said"Treazon verse was ok"Now for spite no,call pes bitches is to light.
    And why your worried about the win you not battle to I say so.

    uhhhhhhm ok?

    and it doesnt really matter because nobody in this place votes
    live and learn, dont be a bitch


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