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    Default Short but Sweet

    Am i heartless? Or do I just not know where my heart is?/
    Well regardless, these nights always seemed the hardest/
    When I dreamed of darkness,.. I need weed to sleep, I seem un-conscience/
    I'm under options,... ..i swear these choices are like voices../
    That only I hear, these voices are just noises, more moisture for the oyster/
    More torture for the author that can't even nurture his daughter/
    Looked no further to bother, never loved her mother/
    Met her once,.. just to fuck her,.. Now i'm the father../
    Now it's harder,.. but I'll smile like romance in moonlight/
    The slow dance gives the tune life,..A slow hand isn't too soon right?/

    Jus a lil somethin' bout anythin'

    pea2e

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    Interesting little verse. I'm not sure of the meaning of a few lines, but your shit pretty much always comes off as being more metaphorical than literal. Keep tossing those darts.


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    thanks for the feedback noel... always a good look..

    pea2e

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    Man too short, but the short verse came off full of meaning! Are you really going through a situation like that? If so hold ya head man!



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    yeh man, goin' thru it..
    Natalie's about 7 months now,

    thanks for the feedback and concern duke

    pea2e

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    Peace to you bro, you need all the encouragement, and support you can get right know!!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
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    Hell razah

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    yeah this was fire

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    much appreciated fam, feedback always recongized, foreally real..

    pea2e

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