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    second round, same as the first, mangle his verse...
    two hits of morphene i spit leave him painlessly murked...

    my hatred is versed in perfect form to stop the ruckus...
    dude should change his name from 'bloodyhookz' to 'sloppypunchez'...

    i'll get you locked in dungeons, it's not for nothin'...
    mutilate you with things you're used to, Glocks and crutches...

    you're not gon' touch this, drop your third, i hate waitin'...
    spit so sick get sympathetic letters from AIDS patients...

    convey greatness, no way you'll ever match the skills...
    put your played gun talk away and let me rap for real...

    attack the field, i'm Earl Campbell when i read rhymes...
    spit so hard, i've broke my own ribs three times...

    defeat weak lines, penetrate your city gates...
    barbarian-type flows, i'm conquerin' your mental state...

    i demonstrate dominance, it's time to submit...
    somebody PLEASE give me a challenge, i'm tired of this shit...

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    Default round 3

    yo check it son, you got slayed in the last two/
    and the only thing you servin' is the customers that paid for they fastfood/
    this faggot, he be takin' the cock straight..../
    and he broke his ribs three times, how?... gittin' raped in the prostate?/
    think you standin' tall, but couldn't rock wit an elf/
    'cause you the type to lose a fight shadowboxin' yourself/
    and you can tell I'm straight breakin' his confidence/
    'cause practicing SNM's... the only time he demonstates dominance/
    I swarm labels wit forty NATO missles and tornados/
    bitch... I'm more fatal than the aids inside a whore's anal/
    ...you'll never walk on my level duke/
    plus the heat'll lift your feet up from the ground like you was rockin' stilleto boots/
    and I don't know this whack faggot on a personal note/
    but I can tell he's backpackin' through the verse that he wrote/
    so I curse at these folks, 'cause how they gon' respect him wit rhymes?/
    ...when I can smash Daliff 89 consecutive times!!!

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    it's close man, but bloodyhookz took it in my eyes.

    props my friend, but daliff, you were close!
    Last edited by Cee Oh Vee; 11-14-2007 at 01:59 PM. Reason: spelling

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    respect for the vote fam, but the battle ain't over just as yet, he has to drop his last verse, but I'd appreciate it if you came back with your vote when it's officially done, peace

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    third round, same as the second, i'm aimin' my weapons...
    directly at his face, break his brain into sections...

    cause painful infections, proclaiming rejection...
    me winning is 'classic Common Sense', but this ain't Resurrection...

    claimin' perfection, that's blasphemy, you're cursing Jesus in church...
    you're not 'slayin' me if your verse gets increasingly worse...

    i'm feeding my thirst, slaughter satisfies my requirements...
    it's a 'bloody' massacre, smackin' guys into retirement...

    should admire this, maybe 'fear' it, make your choices...
    he's what 'CeeDot's talkin' 'bout', a poet makin' noises...

    i'll paint your portait, fuck a brush with death...
    one bar will crush his chest, lay this fat fuck to rest...

    there's nothing left, one verse will bruise your consonants...
    my third verse'll murder you, the first removed your confidence...

    you're doomed and optionless, no way this dude is stoppin' it...
    i'm abusing prominance, i'm George Bush, i nuked your continent...

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    Wordplayloodyhookz
    Vocabulary:daliff89
    Metaphors:daliff89
    Punchlines:daliff89
    Multies:daliff89

    Vote:daliff89

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    props for the vote....

    bump for more

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    aight, 1-0 in your fav...let's git some more

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    ah, my bad for before.

    anyway: i'm not gonna break it down like that, hookz took it as a whole, my previous post still stands.

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    no hate or anything, but i'd like the vote broken down SOME........just a simple 'dude wins' doesn't do it for me........especially since you changed your sig.

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    either way you put it he's gonna vote for me the same way, so it's upto you to let it slide or have him come back and do the standard regulation vote....what's it gonna be?

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    Daliff, I didn't change my sig because of what you said in your rhymes, to be honest that didn't come into my head when I changed it, but to stop your moaning I'll break it down somewhat..

    punches: hookz
    multies: Daliff
    vocab: Daliff
    wordplay: hookz
    metaphors/similes: hookz

    guess what? my vote stays the same.

    I seek refuge with the Lord of Daybreak




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    there's no need to act like a smart ass, i'm just going by the forum rules there kiddo......

    noone is bitching, i'm not mad about the vote, but anyone can come in and say '___ got the win' without even reading it.......atleast the 'break down' takes some time.....

    1-1

    bump for more votes

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    1-1, let's git some more VOTES people

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    i got the winner if they down....i havent been on in months

    i think it was a deece battle

    daliff had some generic typa lines..ok at best...but no flow at all
    bloody took it ..more original and more straight raw punches
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