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  1. #16


    I kill quick, like dangerous wild cats in the jungle,
    Cut throats with sharp teeth and before we rumble,
    tumble you down and clown your whole fam and crew.
    I ponder in my throne with deep thoughts to brew
    Fuck you, Im ghostly, ghastly you see
    Im smoke when you pass glasses of henessee,
    drink your shit, fuck your bitch, steal your cash
    fuck with me I wrap you up, and smoke you like hash
    Be rational bitch, I cut you up quick
    Im like snakes, instead of eyes I have slits,
    direct hits and jaw tap all other players
    slash with energy like jedi light sabers.
    You motherfuckers think you can play this shit online
    but I reap lives like god the heavenly devine
    This shits easy, its like you've been nappin and snoozin
    when you rap, typin on the comp that your mommas been using.
    I've been abusing this shit, beginning day one
    I blast rats with gats until your families done,
    You shunned, because your crew, knows you a pussy,
    Im a veteran underground while your just a rookie.
    Im hard like tookie, I started this shit,
    but no one knows since Im a phantom ghost who spits.
    A menace to the presence of bitches like you
    I chew you out, and spit you back like bad food.
    Your rude, but you cannot back up your claims
    thinking some day you make it, glory and fame
    I came to tell you little man, it'll never occur
    I pet your bitches pussy hard till it meows and purrs.
    But shit I got respect, for the folks who rhyme
    because shit stings like acid sprays of lime
    every time I flow, I remember the prose
    of wu and the killa bees that I intend to know
    Never the less, what the fuck your names bad boy T,
    who the fuck you trying to be, puff daddy?
    Sadly you make rhymes, that are no where close
    while p did's rhymes are simple, stupid at most.
    yeah I boast and brag, but you ugly like hags
    whos tits are so old they get lumpy and sag.
    And I dont need to do shit about skell's rap deposit,
    T's right, hes like gay skeletons, stuck in the closet.
    Yeah I brought it, Im locally known
    you fools retarded, I internationally own
    My flows restarted, simple and yes,
    they hard so they blast holes into your chest.
    dome from the hotties, totin a shotty,
    I left frag grenades to explode in your body
    Yeah your figurative language is nice and alright
    but the shits overloaded, dont live up to the hype,
    and this is what I get, a blank fuckin check
    for some metaphorical shit, that sounds like beck?
    Heck, I intend to destroy, delay, and wreck health
    Im a fucking Phantom, I cut your throat with stealth.

    When reading note that the comma's in a single bar are for pauses.
    Last edited by FantomMenace; 01-14-2008 at 11:55 PM.

  2. #17

    Default by the way

    Outside of the raps though, i liked both your stuff a lot. Very good flow. Might have to vote against my own.

  3. #18


    Uppin for votes what the fuck you on, dope!
    tuck in your clothes bustin your nose did I go wrong Nope!
    I can't picture a fag like you pitcure pitching
    Lip twisting dick twitching in a bitching prison
    You can't leave me bleeding cause you don't know how
    Leave me breathing cause you don't flow well
    Lungs heavy chase of a chevy
    chubby bloody cat screaming SOMEBODY SAVE ME
    Arms of stone WTF you the thing ?
    Bars of chrome with poisoned tipped darts gonna sting
    A sharp see blood but you see your mamas pussy
    A baby see's a cookie but you see your mama's pussy
    The cash rules we drop a pound of c.r.e.a.m.
    BITE THE DUST I didn't know you made a rock band queen
    I didn't finish the last 17 bars cause I got a life and didn't have the time
    Unlike you with a strap rock of crack knife cause you didn't have a dime
    Naturalist flow? you spasticated hoe
    Classic bar of a factuated foe
    You move it cheap cause you can't cover the expensive
    Still spitting in a defensive probly gonna get a bigger percentage
    Your so desperate of a hoe kiss that you snatch his tounge
    Strap his bum dam you dumb don't worry he'll give you the kiss of death son
    Bark and crab ? your darts are fag
    Just like JackOfHearts with no darts to brag
    Hard nut go get your sabre and light saver
    Like Dart vader with darts later than a retard creator
    Give me the pillag eenter the village
    Like I said I got a life so I can't be bovered to finish

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