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    Quote Originally Posted by J.T.S. View Post
    What's up paradox just a little battle rap check it

    on entrance I perform poetic pestilence, poison your brain each sentence
    my flows show excellence diabolically designed to drain your intelligence
    i was heaven sent and never hesitant to use you in my insane experiments
    im the shit, you just excrement that I be breaking down to basic elements
    spit raps that smack you back into relapse and collapse ya home residence
    your styles about as popular as a gas price rise of twenty seven cents
    i stand delivering syllable ridicules that switch your vital signs to critical
    making riddles steadily killing this fool with my subliminal lyrical miracles
    your in the ring with a word wizard spittin’ wisdom with surgeon precision
    making an incision ripping your shit out the system cos when I listen
    to the shit you spittin’ all I see is a lack of grey matter, not a rapper
    cos the fact of the matter is my brain swagger stab a emcee like a dagger
    good verse J.T.S...heres the reverse attack -

    A'yo I Inflate then instigate ya rhymes and await the comeback
    But ya never came cos ya lame but ma brain's lyrically waxed
    Switchback'in cats who be messing with my flow
    My persona's aglow in this dim lit show
    I endevour to jump up and smash up ya set
    I'll agent orange ya mind like a viet war vets
    So lets inject some unpleasantness into this battle
    I dismantle ya armour like a scholar's burrning candle

    And from a different angle, is where i hail from
    Where the norm is knife killing, the blade method son
    So dont pretend, yer tougher than me
    Lyrical ice torpedoes make ya vocal chords freeze
    And then i bust a move thinking that i'm jet li
    Blowing vault's open with my verbal mic assault
    Now step apart from the art cos yer wide of the mark
    This is the example, that ya follow when you embark...






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    I got the mic-phone on deck, so watch my steez
    Rapping like wu more every day, I aim to please
    But i don't mean to do it, It's just the way that i am
    Spitting true to the fam.....But on plan
    Then I flip the script, maestro flows simply disturbed
    I gotta adapt to any verse that my eyes incur
    Paint splur, artistic hand blur
    You ever see a scottish dude rap so superb

    So i go local, bust like I'm a ned
    I go och aye the noo, while i'm eating shortbread
    Never wear tartan, i dont live in a castle
    Everyone carries blades but i get no hassle
    No hot spells, In these city streets i dwell
    It aint bad as the states, but it got the same smell
    So no matter where i'm from, were all one and the same
    And i still got a story to tell
    Last edited by KERZO; 01-10-2008 at 09:03 AM.






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    [quote=Fermi Paradox;1019503]good verse J.T.S...heres the reverse attack -

    A'yo I Inflate then instigate ya rhymes and await the comeback
    But ya never came cos ya lame but ma brain's lyrically waxed
    Switchback'in cats who be messing with my flow
    My persona's aglow in this dim lit show
    I endevour to jump up and smash up ya set
    I'll agent orange ya mind like a viet war vets
    So lets inject some unpleasantness into this battle
    I dismantle ya armour like a scholar's burrning candle

    And from a different angle, is where i hail from
    Where the norm is knife killing, the blade method son
    So dont pretend, yer tougher than me
    Lyrical ice torpedoes make ya vocal chords freeze
    And then i bust a move thinking that i'm jet li
    Blowing vault's open with my verbal mic assault
    Now step apart from the art cos yer wide of the mark
    This is the example, that ya follow when you embark...


    Niceness!! keep crafting, and blasting!
    You got some ill darts



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    cheers mang
    Last edited by KERZO; 01-15-2008 at 05:34 AM.






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    Night sky, eyes bright, open wide,
    Never hide, mental thoughts collide, sparks create
    Death, Fear, Love all relate
    Instate your true feelings or be forced out the state

    Greater good of man is kicked out the gate
    We all have dreams that we have to chase
    But some are out of pace, and fade into space
    While some get obsessed by their slow haste

    Symbol of fortune, graphic torture, flowers in bloom
    Took shrooms 'n' felt doom, omens backward in tunes
    Radio beam fires me up when I shoot the moon
    Sparks ignite from the mic when I electrify the room

    Magnets attract abstract passages in my brain
    Manifesting electroscope optics, intelligently insane
    I'm the mad radical weed smoking beat criminal
    Was meant for rap since i was cut from the umbillical






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    Contemplate the blood hawk, Sharp thought
    Brought up to believe that my lifes' not drawn in chalk
    Glimpse of death I step back and take my last breath
    Never bred for this, but still I impress the rest

    Sparage in the ring'll leave ya bloodage'd up
    Corrupt fuck, devil's luck'll get a blade in ya gut
    So watch out for the kick down style to chase
    I create mad space for my rhymes to lay to waste

    Any MC can phone me any day, they just say
    And i'll come and overturn their turf any day
    You made the mistake but never made the distinction
    Everyone can see that yer words are not so convincing

    Appropriate action, diabolical transactions
    Installing fear in irrational notorious factions
    Max traction, Darts fly like martians, over clouds
    Your never allowed on the mic so get back in the crowd






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    ILL AS USUAL MY MAN THIS IS AN OLD VERSE I CAM ACROSS:

    Equipped with intelligence in my mine you're irrelevant
    quietly spread like pestilence givin heat to bullshit lessons
    chemically unbalanced wasn't a challenge put that to silence
    it's hard to see my people being suspects and victims to violence
    if it ain't one thing its a fuckin nutha
    my brain is like a labrinth equipped wit chambers
    understand that its dangerous
    my game is blameless in its age everything I say is on the page
    I'm in triple-staged darkness with unformed atoms
    my consciousness never escapes from me the relativity of my delivery is the shit
    its always complex when i spit i hit like a thousand comets
    sonic compatiblities but niggas never feel me
    celestial to my galaxy divine presence involuntary
    Independance is bitter sweet but is still a treat
    In my shoes you'll find dead demons hibernatin' within your kingdom
    slay'em to purify the complextion of your spirit
    singodsuperior.com

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    cheers for the post singod...heres a lil verse i just wrote after reading yours -

    Ill equipped with darts that emit
    Ferocious verses that reinforces mic's, when i submit the shit
    I was skin and bones, but now mic-phones get owned
    Phonies throwing rocks at me cos they act like flintstones

    So i make cats grin with my shaolin UK spin
    Haters get chopped up by blades and worn like animal skins
    In a min, i'll begin, then you'll see the full force
    Of my verbal assault, straight back to the point source








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    ill shit, its better than mind to tell the truth.
    singodsuperior.com

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    You write some ill words aswell, i really liked this part in your last flow ...

    "its always complex when i spit i hit like a thousand comets
    sonic compatiblities but niggas never feel me
    celestial to my galaxy divine presence involuntary
    Independance is bitter sweet but is still a treat"

    you like when cats switch between abstract and statemental verses..keep up the good work






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    My sharp darts spit faster than a MK rifle
    I stifle all talent and send it off the eiffel
    Tower top drop, I chop up haters around the clock
    Dead ahead, stop, saved from a potential drop
    I make phonies quake when they make the mistake
    Brainsick styles cured from the eternal lake
    At the bottom is where the low end of the gene pool hang around
    Surround sound underground but ya'll nowhere to be found

    It's the renowned Fermex, so light up ya cigarettes
    The ones with the weed in em, best not forget
    I smoke a bong before i walk out on stage and shock
    With rhymes that kill swifter than a red-tailed hawk
    Paradox abstract thoughts, tie knots, bred a scotsman
    I stand up and get counted as a man with no suntan
    But i'm closer to the american dream, a fan of the supreme
    Mind god spirit duality than most cats aint never seen






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    Sceptics inspect my injected methods
    Most prophetic style, Fermex snaps the hectics
    The next hit will wreck ships and make 'em go under
    When thunder strikes the heart of the butter boy wonder

    I disregard your words and tear apart your verse
    Reimburse yer mom a mil, cos ya must've been a curse
    Crazy paving, lazing in grazing lands while wood engraving
    Enslaving minds with my witty mouth, silver spraying

    Abstractly led sheep with blades that their coats dread
    The next wave of words that shred the thread and made the readers bled
    Good stead i keep, I smoke green all week
    While my girl gives me head with her unique technique

    Superspeaking diatones microphones get blown up
    I interrupt the speaker and make an abrupt cut
    So i heal wounds with bandages and fortune manages
    To erupt and cause mass damages all across the planet






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    Ayo, enter the paradox, vivid visions unseen
    corrupting clean minds with blind obscene routines
    I'm like a mic fighting machine, ripping out phonies spleens
    If you believe the hype then your mind must be keen

    I reinstated the scene,That ya cats thought was dead
    The absract prospect that make ya snap back ya heads
    In respect of the beat, ya'll move your feet
    Then i nail em to the floor with unchartered technique

    The weak will sneak up and speak critique every week
    So i slap them bitches back to the capital of mozambique
    With the full force of a lion, with dull rappers admiring
    My style shining bright like the star city of orion

    Himalayan foot stomp, the swamp world will take notice
    When my rap style blooms like the flowers of a lotus
    Fermex chants that grant the avid listener a ticket
    To a world thick with intellect that leave dumb mc's upset






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    My sharp darts spit faster than a MK rifle
    I stifle all talent and send it off the eiffel
    Tower top drop, I chop up haters around the clock(niceness)
    Dead ahead, stop, saved from a potential drop(like how the line above flows into this one!)
    I make phonies quake when they make the mistake
    Brainsick styles cured from the eternal lake
    phew fiyah fam!

    With rhymes that kill swifter than a red-tailed hawk
    Paradox abstract thoughts, tie knots, bred a scotsman
    I stand up and get counted as a man with no suntan
    But i'm closer to the american dream, a fan of the supreme($ lines of rawness there!)

    Crazy paving, lazing in grazing lands while wood engraving
    Enslaving minds with my witty mouth, silver spraying
    Nice!

    So i heal wounds with bandages and fortune manages
    To erupt and cause mass damages all across the planet
    Whew good imagery there!

    The weak will sneak up and speak critique every week
    So i slap them bitches back to the capital of mozambique
    With the full force of a lion, with dull rappers admiring
    My style shining bright like the star city of orion
    More ill ass imagery, and lines are tight, keep writing fam.



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    cheers for the feedback j.t.s, i've started freestyling over different types of beats so that should help change my rap style in future flows....but like all of ya'll, i'm always learning....






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