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    Default JackOfHearts vs Tek

    are you up for that?

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    best of 3 wins, nice and short
    votes must be explained

    battles have to be in within a week.....21st december.


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    Yea I'm up for it, but weekends are a bit hectic so drop and I'll get to it when I can, probably sunday or monday.


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    aye same here, im off work 2mz so il drop then :P!


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    beat?

    my heart triggers figures, listen to my war fiction
    depiction of death, eyes glisten through crystal meth

    thistled breath leaves crippled pests with the kiss of death
    brittle chest crumpled by little strength- humbled by middle men

    big ben anarchist- strapped with canibus- slapping the over analyst
    acid hits on my battleship- catalyst of war and the darkened abyss

    another cartman pissed- listen to my lyrics, an alcohlolic on the brink
    frolics in pink- blood in the sink- destroying mentalist's hood and the inc.

    weakest link- robinson wit- a mixture of hip hop and pop cultures 40 licks
    courtney couldnt slaughter this prince- drink till im caught in the mix

    fraudian slip when i talk of this prick- antagonist caught in the bigger blitz
    chordian riffs stretches his eduardian spits- leaving behind his head boiled in bits....

    was fairly blitzed when writing this, any quesions just ask!
    thanks for the battle, look forward to seeing yours!


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    That verse was alot better than the other one you had.

    I'll respond when I get some herbs in my system.


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    can see ive lost dusk vote already, might as well chalk that one up ;-)! cheers tek, luk forward to hearing from u!


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    stop feenin.....i wont vote then.

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    lol im not, dont worry about, if u submit a good constructed vote there is no problem!


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    *COUGH*

    I may be peaceful, but I ain't no Bhudist
    Stupid, get Shot and Shop for New Hips
    Foolish I'm a Duelist your a Nudist
    Watch Jack Tip Toe Threw the Tulips
    Look Too Hard can't read the Cue Cards
    A select fight and only a Few Spar
    Think about how much of a Bitch You Are
    I'm skinny but I'll still Hit you Hard
    Knock you out and let you Kiss the Stars
    9 holes through I couldn't Miss the Par
    Drive by your Strip than Ditch the Car
    Teach you rap and make you List the Bars
    Sixteen not Thirty Two no Further Due
    You write Paragraghs like Words is New
    The Nerd of Crews no one Heard of You
    I'm SICK this Kid Is Takin Thermaflu
    Last edited by TeknicelStylez; 12-16-2007 at 10:23 PM.


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    votes?


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    Quote Originally Posted by JackOfHearts View Post
    beat?

    my heart triggers figures, listen to my war fiction
    depiction of death, eyes glisten through crystal meth

    thistled breath leaves crippled pests with the kiss of death
    brittle chest crumpled by little strength- humbled by middle men

    big ben anarchist- strapped with canibus- slapping the over analyst
    acid hits on my battleship- catalyst of war and the darkened abyss

    another cartman pissed- listen to my lyrics, an alcohlolic on the brink
    frolics in pink- blood in the sink- destroying mentalist's hood and the inc.

    weakest link- robinson wit- a mixture of hip hop and pop cultures 40 licks
    courtney couldnt slaughter this prince- drink till im caught in the mix

    fraudian slip when i talk of this prick- antagonist caught in the bigger blitz
    chordian riffs stretches his eduardian spits- leaving behind his head boiled in bits....
    Quote Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez View Post
    *COUGH*

    I may be peaceful, but I ain't no Bhudist
    Stupid, get Shot and Shop for New Hips
    Foolish I'm a Duelist your a Nudist
    Watch Jack Tip Toe Threw the Tulips
    Look Too Hard can't read the Cue Cards
    A select fight and only a Few Spar
    Think about how much of a Bitch You Are
    I'm skinny but I'll still Hit you Hard
    Knock you out and let you Kiss the Stars
    9 holes through I couldn't Miss the Par
    Drive by your Strip than Ditch the Car
    Teach you rap and make you List the Bars
    Sixteen not Thirty Two no Further Due
    You write Paragraghs like Words is New
    The Nerd of Crews no one Heard of You
    I'm SICK this Kid Is Takin Thermaflu
    Im gonna have to vote Jack Of Hearts.

    The use of wordplay was better in my opinion although I didn't like the part were it goes "weakest link- robinson wit- a mixture of hip hop and pop cultures 40 licks
    courtney couldnt slaughter this prince- drink till im caught in the mix" but other than that it was tight.

    Tek started of strong but this part "Think about how much of a Bitch You Are
    I'm skinny but I'll still Hit you Hard
    Knock you out and let you Kiss the Stars" I found a bit too corny for my likeing, good attempt but after that verse Tek never really recovered.



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    do you even rap tauro?


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    No



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    Thanks for the vote Tauro, 1-0 my way.


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