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    Default !!!!!!!!!!!!

    the usual - suspicious business
    vizual - see you through the tip of a cruise missile
    blowing rhymes in kid style since i was 5
    kept everything around me real and alive

    now if i chose to take myself to the animated world
    i know i will survive

    the path of the devils is to make their own minds
    now decide
    and maybe only patience will let you into another life time

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    Default Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!

    I don't know, maybe i need to see more of your verses. But for such a short verse it was simple but had its own motive.

    Peace
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