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    just a quick verse i posted in the dojo


    animal rap i revert to basic instincts
    locked in rage i slay the lyrical misfits
    left disfigured scarred and crippled
    but still thinkin your hard like porn stars nipples
    at night i stalk and build a crop circle
    and leave a mark in the form of a colossal turtle
    symbolism of flows my form can float in
    absorbed you drowned in the blood of romans
    the ruthless emceein super-human
    cat of nine tails i lash them all in unison
    evolution couldnt adapt to me
    my writing hand surpasses mach speed
    i banish wack emcees from the planet
    for spitting weak shit like an overdose of laxatives
    falcon writes inside the ganga mist
    in a shrine within seven rings of candle sticks

    peace

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    It was raw but direct. Nice verse and good flow.

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    short, but raw ... dope shit

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    Before I read the comment's of the other's, I thought to myself " that shit was raw ", peace man, like they say, short but sweet, keep choppin.




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    at night i stalk and build a crop circle
    and leave a mark in the form of a colossal turtle



    evolution couldnt adapt to me
    my writing hand surpasses mach speed


    pure illness. peace, bro
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