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    Default short rap

    know the ledge, flow bout the real
    then chop cats down like banana peels
    dead bodys found throught the feild like peaches
    failing on ya hustle like trees droppin leaves
    crazy troops, shootin at anything that moves, lazy fools
    stuck calling me while hazy tryin move
    the arsenal, ya left only half partial
    leave you in worse condition then what you were born in
    ugly fuck, someone slap him silly
    before i cap him silly
    left broken like a glassjaw
    class in session you just another one of the masses pawned


    added, from another sites battle, i didn't use this
    blazing the beast, keeping it all together, fabricating the beat
    i'm educating the youth at the same time paying St. Gregory
    coined the word biblical, leavin holes in history
    retrieving hoe's misery to plug it in, heaving flows at the industry
    anyone who rips my gold interior faces the hammer
    dummy buyin books bout rappin, kids slayed by the hammer
    you said no pre-written shit, just 8 minutes
    a killer bee you bitching like kids, thrust 8 stingers
    into your heart, thwarted, efforts useless

    you get thrown to the bottom carrying a beggers repect



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    Default Re: short rap

    nice work u turn i would have personally gone with peel instead of chop just my opinion....

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    thanks

    i'm a warlord wit war story boards
    bout the hoes, draning, ect, gory world
    the type like quentin tarintino pulp
    digest it, the flows make you gulp
    slugs in ya body, huggin the tree
    find a shorty, slugging using three
    bullets, you can catch one if your lucky enough
    cuz god knows your ugly enough
    leave heaven split, gods wrist slit
    blood drippin through the cracking
    form of acid rain, the rapid pain
    like lucifer took captive of pain
    its survival of the fittest
    and i'm eyeing no one but my mofuckin self dick
    you a fake ass kid like catchin hiv
    shoulda been a priority
    i smell a snitch like drug tests
    now you want hugs from those who won respect
    fuck looking cute
    i'm looking for the ugliest
    fuck ryhming, my souls rechid
    and my flows reching
    for the pretty things in life, from jewels to diamonds
    bout to knock out the closest fool for his curcuits
    a shotty wit a buckshot, you kno i ain't missin
    what do i have to paint the picture?
    sitten in my castle, rippen the cattle
    i'm the shepard, you the baby holdin the rattle
    theres rules guidelines n all the other shit
    and i ain't lookin for the i love my mother shit
    leave you kill't wit your picture vacant at the funeral
    should of known, i painted the mural
    burnin shit down cuz i'm an arsonist
    runnin shit now cuz i'm a larsonist
    you know nobody's stopping this
    the flows hot hotty, no dropping next
    with these ct cats, anything that moves
    many men scratched my crew
    but to pay em back. used the m16
    penduluym raps got you thinkin bout me
    swat crews raid, i move then spray
    shattering eardrums, what you say?



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    Default Re: short rap

    Quote Originally Posted by u-turn

    added, from another sites battle, i didn't use this
    blazing the beast, keeping it all together, fabricating the beat
    i'm educating the youth at the same time paying St. Gregory
    coined the word biblical, leavin holes in history
    retrieving hoe's misery to plug it in, heaving flows at the industry
    anyone who rips my gold interior faces the hammer
    dummy buyin books bout rappin, kids slayed by the hammer
    you said no pre-written shit, just 8 minutes
    a killer bee you bitching like kids, thrust 8 stingers
    into your heart, thwarted, efforts useless

    you get thrown to the bottom carrying a beggers repect
    i was feelin this verse, good shit.

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    i didn't read the second post u turn, but the first was dope, keep it up

    Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched..
    for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth
    Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System..
    Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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    yeah your improving your work, the thing i think you could improve would be to make the bars of more similar length so it has a better flow, sorta like in the second verse.

    peace

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    Default Re: short rap

    The periodic table of elements doesn't hold
    the components to parallel the chemistry that I withold.
    A nuclear reactor, disguised as a human
    possessing the power to disintegrate structures.
    I'm sealing off ya' doom and ya fate.
    So playa hate me.
    My music gone still be boomin'
    enough to leave you chili-er
    than black beans, peppers, and cumin.
    It would be better for you
    if you occupied a room
    playin' with yo' Playstation III
    while eatin' a bowl of Kaboom's and
    masturbating, with a hand full of
    mashed potatoes,
    while ya' momma in the living room
    watchin' Fried Green Tomatoes.
    Any alternative that could keep you
    from crossing paths
    with the deadliest massacre
    since Egypt felt Jehovah's Wrath.
    Miraculous like Moses's Staff
    or a 1 foot giraffe.
    Or Jesus, when he took a 40 day fast.
    The First shall be Last.
    The Last shall be somewhere deaf and nameless,
    living in the past.
    From the Hamptons to Calabassas,
    I'll embarass ya' ass!

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    Default Re: short rap

    dude.....u suck

    peace
    a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video


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