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    Default Pre-Emptive Strike

    In the thick of the action.
    Stimulate you with the realness and unalike attraction.
    If your curiosity got you askin',
    I'm attempting to get that paper stackin'
    Packin' a punch that'll take knock the verterbrate
    out ya back and
    reposition a five-foot nigga' to the height of Shaq and
    hotter than Jamaicans with a pound of wacky tobbac...and
    I'm black and I'm proud.
    Escaped from slavery and shacklin'.
    A windy city full of hustlin' and clack, clack, clackin'.
    I'm leaving 'em packin'.
    I'm finished with mackin'.
    But if I wasn't, I would get between more legs
    than sanitary napkins.
    Bang it in ya' Lexus, Hummer, Bentley, ya' Cadillac and
    ya' Ford Focus.
    The brokest pockets is finna' fatten.
    You unable to speak, like enemy combatants.
    Tell you the consequence, and say "I told you so"
    after it happens.
    I'm strictly with the hard-core hip-hop. To hell with the "rappin'."
    Exposin' wack niggaz
    like a titty on Janet Jackson.

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    Priceless:The Modern IsIs Dae Ja Nae's Avatar
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    Default Re: Pre-Emptive Strike

    LMAO ... funny verse dude ... you just made my night ...

    (I really hope you intended it to be comical ... Iunno)




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    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

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    Default Re: Pre-Emptive Strike

    It was explicite but contained its own element of surprise. The verse itself.Its flow was a bit diverse but it continued and captures the reader at the end.

    Peace
    PS: Keep posting

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