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    Default Abstract Poet

    THIS IS A SHORT VERSE ABOUT A BROTHER I MET HE SAID HIS NAME WAS KEVIN/
    HOW YOUNG/
    COULDN'T BE 2 MONTHS OVER ELEVEN/
    WE GOT TO TALKIN ABOUT HIS PARENTS AND THEN HE POINTED STRAIGHT TO THE HEAVENS/
    THAT MADE ME SAD/
    THAT I HAD SOMETHING THIS YOUNGSTER NEVER HAD/
    SO THEN I STARTED TEACHING HIM THAT, LIFE GOES ON/
    AFTER THAT I INTRODUCED HIM TO A LITTLE BOOK CALLED THE KORAN/
    THEN SHORTLY AFTER I TAUGHT HIM ABOUT THE 120 QUESTIONS/
    HE WAS AMAZED AT MY KNOWLEDGE, HAD A LOOK OF PERPLEXTION/
    SO THIS VERSE ENDS WITH THE BOYS HEAD FILLED/
    THE BOY SOON SOON HAD THE SELF MOTAVATION TO LEAD HIS LIFE FUFILLED/

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    Default Re: Abstract Poet

    interesting.. original content, nice message too. i didnt like the last 2 lines how it rhymed, other than that it was cool. peace.

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