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    Thanks Sleep...You are always welcome...Hahahaha

    I personaly like the first bit the most...The Sylar part.

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    Whers Moves Incognito...Disapear Like Hiero
    To Another Time Zone...Fuck Anyone Who Sits On A Thrown
    Servants In Heaven Kings In Hell
    Merchants Of Seven Ring The Bells
    Open You'r 3rd Eye Like A Tuatara
    Move As Swift As Cheetara
    Ya'll Get Blown Like Pearl Harbor
    I've Read The Unfallable Parables Of The Guidence To Violence
    And Granduated Top Of My Class...The Highest
    The Sorrow Groans Of Hollow Bones
    Trapped In Chains...Survivor Of Pain
    Like Braveheart Let Freedom Reign
    Father Of Time As Old As Crime...The Hell's Winter Sign
    The Mind Of Sylar...I Know How Things Work...Designed To Hurt
    You Be Wishing I Catch Glimpse Of A Cheerleaders Skirt
    I Throw Darts Like Van Barneveld With The Power Of Gargamel
    I Was Bought By The Omen To Bring Forth The Poems...Approach If You Dare
    I'm Against The Grain Like A Right-Handed Polar Bear
    Do You Allow Suffering Or Stop Care ?
    Keep For Yourself Or Share ?
    Never Been A Pro...More Like A Virtuoso...Puppet Master Like Gepetto...
    Stromboli Unholy Matrimony With Beheadings At The Wedding
    The Man With 3 Arms And No Eyes Refuses To Die
    300 = This Is Where We Fight...And Where They Die...Wanna Try ?
    I Make You Fly...Like Nathan Petrelli Or Vultures In The Serengeti
    I'm Cerebral...Stand Tall As Gothic Cathedrals And Steeples Of Evil I See Dead People
    Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank
    Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men
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    An observational incidence, like Christ in his time
    My defined sequential rhymes proceed to splice your enzymes
    I stand alone, monolith, “2001: A Space Odyssey”
    Society of the cavemen, cowering & surrounding me
    There’s bound to be sounds to see, your psyche be floundering
    Thunderous echoes with “In The Hall Of The Mountain King”
    So deep, crush any mic presence; radios trace me
    At subterranean levels, so much as sight reverence
    My inner devil’s an advocate on behalf of the mind
    Intensive blast of due time, syntax of drastic designs
    Plasticine knives form a PICKET FENCE; oppose my double blade
    Transcend the hands of God, with the wicked vengeance
    The cutting edge, pledging the drunken drawl, inebriated
    Incidental dominance means your fall’s alleviated
    Homicide of needless risk echoes, reverberates
    The terror harmonizes to whatever the murder takes
    Present as a force on the five levels of consciousness
    Never leave my justice to thrive, revel on consequence
    Incisions to the rap abdomen, a dialectic
    C-Section, words a blessing, best to infer confessing
    Criminology, mixing Henney, tonic, linguistics
    My verbal injection brings semiotic specifics
    Explicitly, I'm moving throughout the industry
    At the speed of sound or light, profound with might
    I exist to expound your sight

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    servants in heaven kingz in hell
    merchants of 7 ring the bellz

    ^high level poetry whers, mad props

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    OTB what you think of my drop? any good?

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    yeah D-

    sounded like a drunken freestyle on a winter street corner and you got a dull knife in one hand, a bottle of Hen in the other hand, and an official pocketbook on chemistry tucked inside your hoodie-

    word, it waz abstract, choppy, yet comez at you precise and clear sometimez too-
    i enjoyed the rhythym of it-

    peace-

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    thanks fam, thats the kinda ish i was going for, some random flowing, stream of consciousness shit, puffin blunts on a cold corner rambling out some dartz!

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    Quote Originally Posted by whers View Post
    I Was Bought By The Omen To Bring Forth The Poems...Approach If You Dare
    I'm Against The Grain Like A Right-Handed Polar Bear
    Do You Allow Suffering Or Stop Care ?
    Keep For Yourself Or Share ?
    Never Been A Pro...More Like A Virtuoso...Puppet Master Like Gepetto...
    Stromboli Unholy Matrimony With Beheadings At The Wedding
    The Man With 3 Arms And No Eyes Refuses To Die
    300 = This Is Where We Fight...And Where They Die...Wanna Try ?
    I Make You Fly...Like Nathan Petrelli Or Vultures In The Serengeti
    I'm Cerebral...Stand Tall As Gothic Cathedrals And Steeples Of Evil I See Dead People
    Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank
    Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men
    fuckin ill....i can tell u put mad thought into ur rimes, the wordplay and symbolism are crazy,good shit whers

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    Thanks Sleep...
    Yeah once in a blue moon I will write a verse.
    Art is my real passion but I like this too.

    Thanks for the comment.

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    oretty dope stuff, good wordplay n flow...i would like to see something from you where you stick to a certain concept or topic...
    BABYLON SOON FALL
    "Ya see, I'm a Peaceful man, until you threaten my peace
    And if you mess with my Family, then I'm gettin' my piece"

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    Cheers^
    I'll work on that...

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    damn, that shits nice

    you got some ill lines in there..good shit
    no more albums like the 36 no more

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    whers, my dude that is real sick...

    Quote Originally Posted by whers
    Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank
    Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men
    Keep it going my man.

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    so do i just jump in the cypher you kno do it like this
    or do i light a dutch and raise the blakk fist
    im at this rhymes pin point every continent like an atlas
    Demonic smokin chronic gate keep like the nigga from stetsasonic
    hang wit niggas who throw it up like vomit
    severe punishment chug poisonous tonics
    and fukkin wit RazZ-P is futal
    the rhymes i spit will burn out ya fukkin pupils
    ya funeral im at it leave ya whole face open like the casket
    they call me A SON but im really a DIRT BASTARD

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