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    Default keystyle

    i tried improving by adding wordplay

    poisoned spears, spear hearts an arteries
    bodys hung up on the tapestry
    spreading like pitbulls, at your party
    growing nerves, all of a sudden got hardy
    whipping out everything, from guns to blades
    laying flat ther furst to say my name
    deep in the oasis, hoping it wasn't in vein
    but on the outside, just gave away the AK
    weary, grabbing my naval area
    secrets lurking, peered at like area 51
    felt the death kiss of st. gregory
    hope i don't make any good enemy's
    checking the frequency signals
    out of this era thoughts digging
    should i go back and say sorry to his family?
    or just say fuck it, and cook in the pantry?
    radio personalities aggravate
    left in dismay cause of the per say
    swallowing the gifts i gave
    now i'm cutting away at myself
    loosening the belt, wanting to bang
    but the heart ain't there, the big bang
    happended by myself in my mah's crib
    where mad peasents sleep't
    where sweet dreams were never dreamt
    cuz the exorist dwelled in the city celler
    scratching the rear view mirror



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    Omg!! Omfg!! Jesus Christ Monkey Balls You Fucking Suck Fuck You Fuck You!!

    For A Minuuuute There I Lost Mysellllf I Lost Mysellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllffffff ffffffffffffffffffffff

    Fuck You

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    ok, hows this? tryin improve ryhme structure, another keystyle

    a realist, step close enough you can feel it
    the pain and anguish, ya scalp, i peel it
    why do i sleep? to keep n eye on ya keep
    cuz i kicked you out, others home where i dream
    as it seems, gats in every body's ryhme scheme
    crime sprees, hoping you start crying in ya sleep
    drownin the visions out, the slence n doubts
    i shut down like taxfree piles of crown (the drink)
    blowing like air-pumps, its all fair when i dump
    just shitted on you, squared n dumb
    ya face, kinda ugly, ya name, ain't lovely
    brake wrists to ankles, so don't shove me
    clouds of smoke, along with pounds of coke
    surronding my dome
    tonight, all souls equals choppable
    wet dreams, i make every dream possible




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    AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHhhhdhdh!!!!!!!!! tHAT mAKES ME A VERY SAD PANDA

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    i understand...just go back to watching chucky



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    Bend over son.....It's Boaby time

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    hows this key?

    playing my hand shuffling the deck
    so all is fair, acting tough like critics
    till' the slug comes thru the door, thats when you start running
    but thats when i start punishing
    if you persistant, i'm taking estimates
    going in your chamber raping the president
    taking the residence by storm
    the resins got me wheeling by norm
    kicking in the back, crackity crick
    need prescriptions now, you happy dick?
    uncontrollable winds, juss impossible
    licking shots at you like tootsie rolls, like lil kim' i'm impossible
    dieing by the rock, guess you had enough
    the waters out, guess your finally resting your bluff
    hold ya head, the bricks smacking
    like broken construction sites, shits cracking
    got a grip on the blade
    plus ya lips on the blade
    so pussy lips, shut yo mouth
    slapping shit silly similar to hockey pucks, plow

    good night



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    Quote Originally Posted by Fraz_2oo5
    Omg!! Omfg!! Jesus Christ Monkey Balls You Fucking Suck Fuck You Fuck You!!

    For A Minuuuute There I Lost Mysellllf I Lost Mysellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllffffff ffffffffffffffffffffff

    Fuck You
    ^whas ya problem man, i never seen you spit....

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    ^Lol It was a joke, I didn't even read it.

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    wahahaha


    funny joke.....



    ^that was an joke btw.

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    wahahahaha

    Bend over son... You should know by now its BOABY TIME

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