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    Default just so so

    and so and so
    i see through the eclipse
    mind body and curvy hips
    lust redefined
    ~words break through cusped lips
    on a wave in a storm - the motion is norm
    ~commically at the break of day - dance + play
    commercially immersed in the depths of subconscious verse
    dabble in dappled light effects - catch beats - in sharks nets
    _ to nest with the vernacular - bite brains with the vulture
    - from memphis culture to Egyptian architecture

    and so and so
    i see words through broken lips
    the mind rips
    and life is eclipsed

    just a clip from a bad movie
    when arnie shot 3 bullets and destroyed a whole army

    calm water haze
    of celestial days
    a film of the brave

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    Default Re: just so so

    Its a very lassic type of verse, quite estatic. Cause it benefits everyone that can capture its flow. And height of purity in poetic style. Nice verse standard and poetic

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