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    Sometimes I take a step and fall 3 paces behind

    One line, Iíll break a rep and all see traces behind

    Talkin bout cat was dope, whatever happened to his rappin?

    Walkin out, cat does hope, but ever slackin, do this strapped in

    Not- all- foes, some, my name, they donít know

    Spot- fall- shows one, I aim, stay low, though

    If you out duckin range, I wonít pick you off

    SHIT! Dude shout, stuck in pain, I goní stick you soft

    Blubber hangin out, cream, iced, runnin down the cone

    Brother bangin stout, seen nice, stunnin crown, the throne

    Hurricane storm with I controllin the eye

    Blurrin stains, warm pith, I told him gíbye

    Before I spit the last syllable, vowel, and consonant

    The more I hit, the blast kill the bull, bowel incontinence

    I rhyme in every single couplet

    Iím climbin, saver the tingle, covet it

    Iím climbin, saver the tingle covet it

    I rhyme in every single couplet

    The more I hit, the blast kill the bull, bowel, incontinence

    Before I spit the last syllable, vowel, and consonant

    Blurrin stains, warm pith, I told him gíbye

    Hurricane storm with I controllin the eye

    Brother bangin stout, seen nice, stunnin crown, the throne

    Blubber hangin out, cream, iced, runnin down the cone

    SHIT! Dude shout, stuck in pain, I goní stick you soft

    If you out duckin range, I wonít pick you off

    Spot- fall- shows one, I aim, stay low though

    Not- all- foes, some, my name they donít know

    Walkin out, cat does hope, but ever slackin, do this strapped in

    Talkin bout cat was dope, whatever happened to his rappin?

    One line, Iíll break a rep and all see traces behind

    Sometimes I take a step and fall 3 paces behind

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    Default Re: Couplet

    The start of the vers eis nice and flows with knowledge there somewhere, as the verse progresses it seems you're now busting. But it has its own element

    Peace

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    I like the way the verse went backwards and forwards
    NICE Born

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    Thanks. I guess you have to hear the delivery...

    Ben, hit me. I got music to send.

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