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    Default Butter Vs. (Open Challenge)

    id rather battle someone new but anyone is fine.

    5-10 bars, no riding, no feeding, no hating.

    ill be dropping at 10 Pm GMT onwards.. i have work.

    you can drop here and ill come back to you, as theres no feeding it makes no difference.
    If I Offend You .. Fuck You I Intend To ..

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    i dodge your bulls*** like toilet
    maneuver my mic accross your forehead, strick you lyrically and you enjoyed it
    splash nigga spit, script rewritten to blast out
    i rhyme hard like crack rock, stomp you flat out
    you just a young dick getting touched by preists
    over the edge of the world, i bubble over like yeast
    flashed at you like police in the middle of the night
    attention paid well, im always in the spotlite
    nightlife graphic, vomit on you while i spit sickness
    my sexual lyrics circumsize you, leave you dickless
    you ichabod crane, my horses ride by and leave you headless
    you a stain in my jeans, i shout you out, clean and spotless
    reanimate your crackhoe rhymes, illuminate the stage
    i am the remaining five chapters, bitch, turn the page
    my s*** is over for like your brainless rhymes and laced dimes
    you a stuck up kid, your rhymes are petty crimes
    when i finish you, you'll be sniffin lines and getting raped
    while i be rockin hood to hood on a globe scape
    microphone assult like murder and armed robbery
    y'all niggas say you straight, but you enjoyed my rhyme sodomy
    im piss poor with my s***, constantly shutting up niggas lips
    write rhymes up and down your colon, massive ink makes your ass rip
    like feathers: you get clipped, you think you hot? you get hit
    my rhymes are so sick, so get the f*** off my dick
    verbs attack you like pronoun welts, my rhymes single handedly beat you with belts
    i just think up the rest myself
    take your earnings for no reason and beat you to death
    i inhale your rhymes and put em out like spliff
    i access your brain directly and control your innermost thoughts
    your money and your clothes is what i have saught
    you cant see my reflection after i spit my bars
    my lyrics run like horses and cars, excessive like tar
    everytime i drop my dimes you know i cant be beat
    but i wont make an album, word on the street
    i have your hoes stabbing one another on your corner
    now you cant talk or be acknowledged like a foreigner
    you dont even read my s***, so i guess im bornin ya
    im so hot that my rhymes get inside and melt the core of ya
    bust of luck, twists of faith and passion to your worm
    i inpregnate the rap game as if i were sperm
    i could keep postin hot battle rhymes, but you wont learn

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    Default Re: Butter Vs. (Open Challenge)

    ok ill drop when im back from work, can you shorten that too within the 10 bars.
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    pic yo poison i do it in 8 lines
    yo will get squashed like wat m did to royce da 5' 9"
    its fine its just yo time every butcha has his day
    shoot of verbal assult yo ass is dead
    aim for the head neva missin i'm quick to pullin
    you an mc bitch who the fuk r u foolin
    stop droolin the cream looks good but you aint getin
    hand maid my meat u servin
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    Like battlin on a road, id kick you over, people callin me Kirby/
    I fucked you up worse than a drunk docter during heart surgery/
    'Fake threats under oath' only come to one thing like 'purjery'/
    you had to many 'dicks in the ear' no wonder you never 'heard'a me'/
    I Submit Torpedos in my spit,'drown' into perell like a 'marine'/
    you 'dribble so slow' it makes 'cancer' look like its 'moving at lightspeed'/
    even the '3 blind mice' could say they 'see' you like 'dreams'/
    you even got a Whole 'Team who dreams' not if i transform them to 'nightmares and screams'/
    only time you come 'quick', is infront of a 'pornographic re-cord'/
    only time you can 'spit', is infront of a '15 inch Tft and a keyboard'/
    Your no longer 'tight' like a once apon 'virgin' locked up in a 'prison'/
    ill leave you 'runnin like emission', even though it wasnt your 'volition'/
    im like a 'chiroptractor', 'bending over backwards' will just crack it 'back at ya'/
    which wouldnt make much difference, as your 'best' would be ranked down to 'amateur'/
    with 2 'ass cheeks' and a 'cock', your' known as the best maker of a'sandwich'/
    Like an 'expired Website', you've probably taken out all of the 'bandwidth'/
    like 'blackalicious' you couldnt beat me if you had the 'gift'/
    Ill rap in 'G's' just so you can afford that long awaited 'face lift'/ (G-Force)
    When its all over ill be sure to leave 'John Doe On A bracelet'/
    Always remaining un-named like 99 % of 'Butters neverending Gravesteps'/

    made a few changes but yeah, to either of you, vote people.
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    its been decide they cant even follow they own rules
    smack yo ass silly danm these dumb fools
    i neva hate i just bring down yo persona
    smack u wit yo own hand make my pre madona
    in this line i'm done u demenished, rook nigga check mate u finished
    ROCKD IN THE HAUSE<- WU-TANG SOUL MENACE

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    Default Re: Butter Vs. (Open Challenge)

    i dodge your bulls*** like toilet? hahahahahahahahaha....that is fuckin funny man
    anyway I vote butter-had better overall rhymes, both pretty good but butter gets my vote
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    Default Re: Butter Vs. (Open Challenge)

    peace, i need to work on my punches, people tell me that all the time its just, coming up with good ones lol, i suppose thats always the problem lol.

    weathermen are sick yes 8)

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    Default Re: Butter Vs. (Open Challenge)

    Butter took this, some punches strong, some weak... but overall a much better and more well-rounded battle verse than visuals. visual's wasn't bad, some punches hit hard, others fail to even connect, good battle tho, that's what we like to see... oh, and Rock D - FUCK OFF and get your own battle going in another thread bitch! ONE

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    Default Re: Butter Vs. (Open Challenge)

    Quote Originally Posted by SpOk3N
    I dunno, but, usually people take a shit in the toilet. So, how can it avoid it?
    its a freestyle... i dont even know what im sayin...

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    yea.. i say butter on this one.. he's improving

    some lines were a bit bland but overall that wasn't too bad of a verse

    visual has creative thoughts but needs to learn how to make them flow better... his shits too random

    v butter

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    Quote Originally Posted by G...
    Butter took this, some punches strong, some weak... but overall a much better and more well-rounded battle verse than visuals. visual's wasn't bad, some punches hit hard, others fail to even connect, good battle tho, that's what we like to see... oh, and Rock D - FUCK OFF and get your own battle going in another thread bitch! ONE
    look u dumb fuck i thought the guy that posted would have gotten dq because it was more than 5-10 lines wtf u tlk about. so i thought he would battle me because i actually followed the rules. now u FUCK OFF AND GET THE FUCKING FACTS STR8
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    hello rock head, why didnt u respond to my verse, it killed u. i think u should give up this whole "pretend, rapper, b-boy shit" and go and fulfill ur potential. as ja-rulez hype man.
    fitty cent is better then wutang
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