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    Default quick verse

    im new here so ima juss drop a lil sumthin n see what yall think

    fuck the pearly gates, im bein followed by a black cloud
    since an early age, ive hung around wit a wack crowd
    caught up in wirly ways, n packin gatts that clap loud
    not the violent type im the silent type in the back ground
    i wear my hat down n never back down from wack clowns
    who think they hard cause they pack now, im in the street lights
    my speech type i keep tight n never be seen with the weak type
    ive seen some bleek nights, seen shoot outs and street fights
    i paints a pretty picture wit a witty scripture wen i squeeze mics
    you know my steez right, i aint no gangsta or a drug dealer
    you gots no love for me, it dont matter i got no love either


    juss a lil sumthin

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    fuck the pearly gates, im bein followed by a black cloud
    since an early age, ive hung around wit a wack crowd
    YO YOU GOT MAD SKILLS
    But........ummm.....
    Why not say FUCK THE BLACK CLOUD you're in as OPPOSE TO SAYING F@%K the pearly gates.
    God don't do bad things .
    That black cloud is the devil trying to blind you from visualizing the beauty of the "pearly gates" within you.
    Here's my response thou...........
    Fuck the black cloud/ for confinding us to a wack crowd/
    Let's find the pearly gates/ and bless our sons at a early age/
    1love

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    Default Re: quick verse

    yeah i coulda worded it better
    thanx for the feedback n help man preciate it

  4. #4

    Default Re: quick verse

    Quote Originally Posted by 83 raw
    yeah i coulda worded it better
    thanx for the feedback n help man preciate it
    Man......It's all good.
    PEACE OUT.
    Hold ya head!!!

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