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    what I dont know is killing me but not in the physical
    what I dont flow is a mystery so it aint that mystical
    its habitiual the literal ritual of literature
    that officials the mental with procedure and principal
    plentiful fistfulls of lyrics bareknuckle punch your lips and grill
    bloodyin your nose just from reading these darts twisted so well
    and spun at the target hittin bullseye like a marksman
    when the bars hit your thirst is quenched by the blood from your own heart
    spit that back out when you spit your raps out
    spell out your little captions to your mental picturehouse
    so I can visualize the actions you take when you gettin down
    you entered the Temple of Darts now you backin out
    with wounds to meditate on eyes glued to this groove
    you choose your own adventure like those books where you lose
    if you flip to the wrong pages from followin the wrong clues
    you landed here to hear me tell you a lot of new news

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    your name says it all kid, definitely on point with this drop!
    "ya'll niggas can't be serious, i was nice before ice, before christ, before the the words let there be light, and the light took over the night, i was born wit the mic, lord of the mic before all plant and animal life, took this rap shit to new heights before the wright brothers took flight, before dogfightin' and aerial strikes, before mc's picked up pens and started to write" - Canibus

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