EDIT-battle wasnt over.
Last edited by oDoUoSoKo; 04-23-2008 at 06:32 PM.
ok, effortless crappy punchlines? i got bitch, now watch this
i got no motherfuckin time, like MILF hunters without watches
for fisher prices postures, and Grim Reaper Imposters
you couldnt fuck with my sickness if u tried to sleep with the doctor
Eradicate i lost ta? ur facin a Mod, to many had Dibs
and came after my lines like one of ur shitty adlibs
i could go on for days, bout how u go on for days in each of ur lines and-feel-like-ur-punches-are-so-dope-that-you-need-to-combine
speaking of rhymes, ill crush ya larynx when i perform, and choke ya
and u could speak into a mic for life like former smokers
when storms approach ya, you better bring more than totes ta, sheild the large assault
bombard ya fault lines with hardened bolts of lightning, and jars of salt
for spicing ya wounds, and making you shout in agony
these rappers biting my tunes, must've gotten a hold of a thousand dragon teeth
so im sorry i was late, but i had no time for the clever banter
but whos a better rapper? thats the best question ive ever answered..... votes.
EEESH!! Good Business by both Emcess But wowser@ this dude eradicate.. definitely beastin..
I'll smash this fight as i rip, gash, and slash-sights
Cause when its time to beat 'dusk' I'll just bring a 'flash-light!'
Watch this dude-get-nervous, bitch take the needles straight through-ya-surface
Im rippin thru 'bar codes' to show I 'owned' this bitch like a 'proof-of-purchase'!
this fool-is-worthless, enough said.. this clown-who-duck-vets
Fuck lines I spit ‘fortune cookies’ YOU want to ‘READ’ em before you ‘BITE them’
Your eye’s whipe-them.. I point to dump-clips, and leave your ass NUMB-kid
Dumb shit.. you don’t bite bullets like Bruce Lee, You bite em like his SON-DID (ohhhh)
my bad Dusk, but that was way abusive.
daamn....i cant really decide... i think yall should go 1 more round
Punches - Tie
Flow - Dusk
Personals - Eradicate
Vote - Eradicate.
i always hated when people put commentary behind their lines ('lol'....'OHH!!!!'......'DAMN!!!'), shit just seems corny to me.....
Eradicate had a nice first verse......some cool lines.....flashlight line stands out......but ALOT of his shit was forced rhymes......the whole 'guns that launch typhoons/sonned like at high noon' multi is REALLY a stretch.....
Dusk's first verse was a little more on the audio side it seemed like........like it would of sounded cool if it was spit over a beat, but in text it's just not as impressive to see 'pass the blade/lacerate/match and fate/etc.'
Eradicate's second verse wasn't as good as his first, though i did like the Bruce Lee line........still alot of forced rhymes, starting to think it may be an accent difference though and not really THAT forced......
Dusk's second verse was much better than his first......he actually had some sort of personals this time instead of just multis with dude's name......i like that he went after the first thing i saw, the 'text ad-libs'........
overall, this is one of the better battles i've seen on here.......
i have to give my vote to Eradicate.......more personals, better punches.......Dusk had a better flow overall, but that matters the least to me in text battles........
Props on the feed and votes..
Ya it flowed for me it seemed, different strokes for different folks i guess (OHHHHHH!!)
Ill wait and see if Dusk accepts the votes..
So i guess this is over with then Dusk??
Go ahead and add it to the statistics doggy.
ok everytime i read eradicates verse i was like thats good and then read dusks verse and was like DAMN thats good so i vote for dusk it was alot more funny to me and it was a great battle very close....
and if u cud vote on my battle with demented please do even tho i asked him for a round 2 just vote plz/
Killbot Beats 2008 NIGGGAAAAAAAAA
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*shakes dusk's hand*
it only took two weeks to get it done!! not bad