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    Default quick verse

    another lil drop

    i take a look in some of these emcees rhymin books
    read a verse n already know how much time it took
    five minutes for you to write that shit
    mc hammer wouldnt even bite that shit
    fuck ya gun talk, i kill ya writtens wit one thought
    ya scripts hopeless i spit dopeness,rap is blood sport
    i spit focused n rip jokers, what you actin a thug for
    i got no love for these wannbees my flow stings like a swarm o bees
    so if you step wit that fake ass cake ass flow you aint harmin me
    sick o these thugs n shit, is every rapper a blood or crip
    dont think so,ya career sink slow,u aint spittin for the love of it
    i dont care bout sales or billboard charts my levels above of this
    yall lost ya cause, im still that rebel with a game plan
    i spit so evil you'd think me n the devil were the same man
    its lame man...
    how you can gain respect from a couple o bullett wounds
    i picked ya card out the deck n im ready to pull it soon
    i shine so bright to blind ya sight, like the fullest moon
    ya career on thin ice n im in the water to pull it through

    juss a lil freestyle shit
    im bored

    lol

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    Default Re: quick verse

    i take a look in some of these emcees rhymin books
    read a verse n already know how much time it took
    five minutes for you to write that shit
    mc hammer wouldnt even bite that shit
    You pull no puches and your words leave no room for misunderstandings.

    Your words also come off with a lotta hunger.
    Almost like a d-block member or a Theodore unit member.
    You and "trife da god" would go at it with the rhymes.
    PEACE!

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    Default Re: quick verse

    Yeah this was pretty good man keep scriptin' you'll see ya rhymes advance more but nice for a freestyle.



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    Default Re: quick verse

    It rhymed okay, but you need to improve on your content, i suppose you were busting

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