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    "I use to scream .....

    when the night seem cruel to me.

    til I seen ......

    it's cruelty killed by day" -Chaos

    Ayo Ayo Yo

    "From boys to men 2 the end of the road.
    From men to wise men getting old, our story told thru a new light"

    "Just imagine what I think of my life, and who are you to say and think it ain't right"

    "Was just a captain in my past life, on a ship crusing thru dark waters
    Pirates using our iris as our flashlight"

    Just a little suttin"

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    you got potential mayne

    this was a little short but still dope

    keep at it son

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    I'll be back with a 16.
    Fuck it maybe a 32
    YO THANKS 4 the feedback.
    We need more people commenting on our work on here.

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    Its quite creative, although you used not too creative lyrics (but the way you put it leaves a lot to bew expected from your style).

    PS: Keep posting

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