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Thread: HIPHOP, "Light" of mcees

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    Default MCEES! where is your"Light"?

    yoh! bcuz u think u rock chains,ice,4uck bitches and puff L's/
    brother, dat means u not superb/
    i see u wretched,poor,miserable,blind and naked/
    all u do is wicked/
    repent! u dont need 2 be stupid/
    niggas wivout attitude end their lives in da dark b4 dey see tha light/
    i wonder wat hiphop has changed/
    if not addin to crime,beef,guns and hate/
    only wat sum mcees relate with/
    so we came here 2 change it/
    u dont need to emulate their ways to change/
    wont give up lyk cronite and masta ace who already gave tha fight up/
    instead of helping to build these young kurupt mcees up/
    wat do u gain in da street fights, tha beefs and tha homocides?/
    hip hop was GODs eye/
    given to mcees in form of a light/
    so we pollute tha light and extinguished tha light/
    no wonder,NAS said hiphop is dead/
    so wat do you do to revive it back?/
    Last edited by d22; 05-10-2008 at 11:41 PM. Reason: Sum things needs to be changed in hiphop.
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    why do you use '/' at the end of every line. do you write your rhymes like this -

    up jump the funk then fill a bucket with junk/rhymes flying out my mouth like sooper dooper spunk/ya feelin me, ya seeing me so ya''ll believin me/Now watch as I pee on your moms setee/

    then split it into lines like this -

    up jump the funk then fill a bucket with junk/
    rhymes flying out my mouth like sooper dooper spunk/
    ya feelin me, ya seeing me so ya''ll believin me/
    Now watch as I pee on your moms setee/

    I aint taking the pis bro, i was just wondernig cos i've seen a few people use '/' and i was'nt sure why...so maybe you can enlighten me






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